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Love It Doesn't Take a Day

Updated on June 13, 2012


I heard someone once foolishly say,

Real, true, Love it doesn't take a day.

Love sometimes... it takes weeks

Love doesn't run..... Love it creaks


When you look for Love. .. don't rush

Love isn't hard...... Love is mush

Love is soft and slow, Love is nice

Love is sweet sugar,

Love always needs a little spice


Love is real happiness

Love comes when it's my turn

If I wait long enough, I will get you

this..... Love has made me learn.


Love is the way I feel....

about your tender touch.

To kiss your lips, hold you close

Love It Doesn't take to much


So next time just remember

Love It Doesn't Take a Day

My love will be forever

My Love It Is Just that Way












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    • ashleeosborn profile image

      ashleeosborn 5 years ago

      This poem grabbed me by the heart. Beautiful.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you, Ashlee. your comments are always welcome,

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      Anan Celeste 5 years ago from California

      A lovely poem as always my fiend...

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      Angelme566 5 years ago

      Oh my how beautiful is your love , seems made in heaven. For me that is one face of love , but there is other side of it , the not so good side of it..love is sacrifice , a tears and for life a pain.

      You write it so romantically ! voted Up !

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      dotty1 5 years ago from In my world

      Aw what a lovely poem, really enjoyed its beautiful words

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      smga22 5 years ago from Dhaka, Bangladesh

      Excellent poem. Waiting to get more from you

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ananceleste, thank you for your comments .glad to see you on my hub.

      @my sweet angel, thank you angel, I only write about about the sad side of love when I remember my broken heart. enjoy the happy side.

      @dotti, thank you dotti. i have missed you.

      @smga22, thank you for the comments. i hope to bring you many more. Read some of my older ones , I'm sure they will keep you company till the next new one.

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      bluebird 5 years ago

      The best love songs and poems are written from a broken heart...and although it is a lovely poem, I'm sorry for broken hearts. Why can't life be full of love? Why must there be heart ache?

      Someday we'll all find out what life is really all about. I think we are here to become better characters no matter what life throws at us. I mean, what else will we take with us when we die?

      You my dear friend have a good heart and character, I can tell by the way you write.

      I am thankful you are here on hubpages sharing with us. God is for us and that's what counts, His love can be depended upon.

      Take care my friend...and peace.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      my little bluebird. thank you for your kind words on my work.

      yes, I think god sent me to hub pages for my own good . he did not send me to save anyone but if i touched one life with my poetry or writes on the scourge of drug abuse then I have done a tiny part of his work. He has shown me the way, for sure.

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      Ryem 5 years ago from Maryland

      This is a really good poem. It is very delicate and sweet, but the emotion carried in it is so strong.

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      Jackie Lynnley 5 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Great flow, rhythm, and body. I like it!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ Ryem, thanks for the comments

      @ jackie, thank you Jackie.

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      Dianna Mendez 5 years ago

      Such a great thought on love helping you to learn. I think that love is something that if you must wait for it, it will mean even more to you.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      teaches, yes life has many learning moments of love . thank you for your comments

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      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      What a tender moment, amazing poetry as always, very touching.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you max,

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      love from sweet Michael is the greatest feeling...

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      cleaner3 5 years ago

      Thank you ,Raci.

      I love you..

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