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Love--Just Love...Right?

Updated on March 14, 2012

Love--how your sweet tenderness and loving soul bestowed this heart of mine. Dive into the sea of paradise--just wondrous, just wondrous. Like love bird sweet chirp in early spring.

Love-- is a form of paradise, beautiful like heaven made rainbow-- angelical, glorious, and magnificent. It lullabies your heart and blind your eyes, every tender word whisper to your ear, your heart soften, beaten out of rhythm. Everything she tells you or he tells you, you say and think it’s true.

Love-- start with a seed of apple and it grew. Soon it start to blossom and became a fruit. Each fruit is different though it is from the same tree. Its apple, yet, some are sour and some are sweet. Some are juicy sweet yet with worms and some are sour but delight.

Love—is poisonous and addictive, like spell being cast by a cupid. Wrapped like a gift of goodies; drift in his arm... far away...leaving everything else behind.

Love-- dangerous like mass of grave buried so deep. Pierce this heart and implant thorn; self-esteem, self-love, and daily living burns into ashes. Dried like rose, deteriorate like dead body...lonesome, hurts


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      Justin W Price 5 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      nice work... and the presentation is fabulous!

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      chanroth 6 years ago from California, USA

      Hello everyone, thank you very much for commenting, reading, and voting! I appreciate it. @imKarn23, is there anything else more painful and joyful? :) hehe...thank you


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      Dilip Chandra 6 years ago from India

      Lovely hub chanroth, it is beautiful...

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      Karen Silverman 6 years ago there anything more painful and joyful at the same time! Beautifully written!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 6 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome! Your right unfortunately a lot of times love hurts but it can also be beautiful if it is the right love.

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      Joyce Haragsim 6 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Great poem, written so well, vote up and awesome, Joyce.

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      time2rite 6 years ago from Navarre, Fl, USA

      Chanroth, this is a very bittersweet but beautiful piece. The illustrations you used are very emotive in and of themselves. Voted "Up" and "Beautiful.

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      Greg Schweizer 6 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Chanroth, Beautifully written and expressivly said. Greg

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      Irob 6 years ago from St. Charles

      very nice