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Love Unmade

Updated on June 6, 2011
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I wish you'd ask me what I'm thinking

For unlike you it is not "nothing"

It is actually quite something

Worth the close of that book


Ask me and I would describe

Visions of your hand sliding

Mischievously pushing my gown aside

Awakening sleeping curves


I would tell of tiny goosebumps

Raising across my belly at the thought

Of your heated breath at my navel

Lips brushing gentle kisses there


And then confess of longing

To be held in your palm

Warm and safe my most sacred place

Blooming in your hand


But you won't ask

And I won't tell

And we will sleep and I will dream

Of love unmade

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    • Randy Behavior profile imageAUTHOR

      Randy Behavior 

      7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Glad you came by Mr.Moonlight.

    • Mr.Moonlight profile image

      Mr.Moonlight 

      7 years ago from Tampa (SoHo)

      Nice work, this poem. It struck a nerve.

    • Randy Behavior profile imageAUTHOR

      Randy Behavior 

      7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      I'll go have a read. I have a couple like that, one got 35,000 views before I had to take it down.

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      Tony DeLorger 

      7 years ago from Adelaide, South Australia

      Nice one RB. What's your partner doing asleep? Crazy. I wouldn't be alseep. Have you read my Hub 'Clitaclysmic'. I did go too far to see what would happen. The hub is posted, but they took away all advertising. Have a read, let me know what you think. Tony

    • Randy Behavior profile imageAUTHOR

      Randy Behavior 

      7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Hey Epigramman, I just finished a spicy one but don't know if HP would like it.

      I do what I can in the cold season Micky.

    • Micky Dee profile image

      Micky Dee 

      7 years ago

      Very warm! Thank you ma'am!

    • epigramman profile image

      epigramman 

      7 years ago

      ...well there is nothing unmade here about my love for your writing - it's making me feel a little mentally unchallenged at the moment - and it's true though you are one of the great ones here - so Hubpages dosen't get too tepid!

    • Randy Behavior profile imageAUTHOR

      Randy Behavior 

      7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      I'm glad you like my naughtiness RandomLife.

    • RandomLife profile image

      RandomLife 

      7 years ago from Nashville TN

      Another great hub! I enjoyed reading =)

    • Randy Behavior profile imageAUTHOR

      Randy Behavior 

      7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      No sweeter compliment could be laid upon me, thank you. I do so love to rock.

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      Doug Turner Jr. 

      7 years ago

      Argh! Nothing worse than love unmade -- well, being attacked by giant spiders would be worse, but missing romantic opportunities pretty much sums up my teenage years and early twenties.

      This poem is great. I really like your clear, imagery-laden style. You rock, Randy B.

    • Randy Behavior profile imageAUTHOR

      Randy Behavior 

      7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Now you're thinking!

    • Joyus Crynoid profile image

      Joyus Crynoid 

      7 years ago from Eden

      Mmmm...tonight at bedtime I'll think twice before opening that book, and be sure to ask my wife what she's thinking...

      Thanks RB!

    • Randy Behavior profile imageAUTHOR

      Randy Behavior 

      7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      I don't like it either. Pitfall of relying on ESP. Thank you Marco.

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      marcofratelli 

      7 years ago from Australia

      I don't like when love is not made!! But I love your writing and even more so, your avatar - it's still the best!

    • Randy Behavior profile imageAUTHOR

      Randy Behavior 

      7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      I no longer believe in coincidences. So many stories out there sitting on the curbs. I am not brave enough to hear them. Thanks for that peek.

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      saddlerider1 

      7 years ago

      Wow what a coincidence ESP working at it's finest. Cheers Thank you for paying me a visit, much appreciated, and sorry for the chills, goose bumps feel better:0)

    • Randy Behavior profile imageAUTHOR

      Randy Behavior 

      7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      You were here reading me Saddlerider while I was over there reading you. :)

    • saddlerider1 profile image

      saddlerider1 

      7 years ago

      Welcome back Rand Behavior, you had me at the goose bumps:0)and love unmade as I rolled over and zzzzzzzzz.

      How sad, I would prefer to be at the navel with lips brushing gentle kisses there, okay now I'm off to the showers, cold, brrrrrrrr. he he.

    • Randy Behavior profile imageAUTHOR

      Randy Behavior 

      7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Thanks Minnetonka Twin... its a fine line I love to walk!

      Cheers

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      Linda Rogers 

      7 years ago from Minnesota

      Nice job on this Randy. You kept it interesting and romantic without giving us too much. Beautiful writing:)

    • Randy Behavior profile imageAUTHOR

      Randy Behavior 

      7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      Hmrjmr1-Thought it was time Randy did something in keeping with her name. :)

    • Hmrjmr1 profile image

      Hmrjmr1 

      7 years ago from Georgia, USA

      Haven't seen ya for a while RB- another great poem hits right to the heart of it.

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