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Love at one stroke!

Updated on December 14, 2015

Foozlingly miserable
I may be
in my foppish kind of love
but
my dear
my feelings for you
simple and genuine are!
To your compassionate nature
plead i
to look at the footprints
in my footworn path of love
that speaks volumes of
the footwork of mine;
Oh Sisyphean love,
my heart seems to slip and roll down
even as it attempts to reach
the pinnacle of
the marble heart
of yours!

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      sujaya venkatesh 23 months ago

      tnq 01

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      Lawrence Hebb 23 months ago from Hamilton, New Zealand

      Enjoyed this poem

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      sujaya venkatesh 24 months ago

      tnq Lar

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      Larry Rankin 24 months ago from Oklahoma

      Wonderfully done!

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      sujaya venkatesh 24 months ago

      tnq Jo

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      John Hansen 24 months ago from Queensland Australia

      Delightfully expressive Sujaya. Well done.

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      sujaya venkatesh 24 months ago

      tnq much Do

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      Dora Weithers 24 months ago from The Caribbean

      You have great skill in word art. Footprints, footworn, footwork of mine; don't forget foozlingly. Classic!

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      sujaya venkatesh 24 months ago

      tnq Man RLA

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      Rachel L Alba 24 months ago from Every Day Cooking and Baking

      A love poem that's real in it's feelings. I enjoyed it.

      Blessings to you.

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      manatita44 24 months ago from london

      Power and sweetness in simplicity. truly awesome!

      Note: my name 'manas --mind. Tita -- beyond.'

      Manatita. "Beyond the mind --in the Heart of our Lord beloved Supreme."-Sri Chinmoy.

      Given to me by my Beloved Spiritual Teacher in 1989. Hari Om!