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Love in creation!

Updated on October 13, 2015

God invented you

and

I discovered you

so

that defines me;

I ain’t an atheist

or a heathen,

a pagan I am not;

have an eye for beauty

and

a ear for melody;

heckle not me

with your questioning brows,

a hedonic future

hinges on a love-nod of yours,

habit of tasting all that smells good

over the years

have fetched me this far

to your abode,

heighten your spirits

to vibe with

my bingo of epicure,

to experience the synonymous life of mine

that similizes our love!

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      Dianna Mendez 2 years ago

      I love your opening.. God invented you and I discovered you. This is simple but very much hits a romantic note for me.

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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnq DDE

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      Devika Primić 2 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      A well written poem and with such great meaning.

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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnq so much for your lovely words

      'ear' has a consonant sound, like when it is pronounced it will be like 'year' and hence 'a ear'

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      Larry Rankin 2 years ago from Oklahoma

      Wonderful poem!

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      Dora Weithers 2 years ago from The Caribbean

      More beautiful expressions.

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      suraj punjabi 2 years ago from jakarta

      Beautiful poem. You are very talented, You seriously need to copyright your poems lest they be copied. Keep up the great work. I also noticed an error which you should edit" you wrote "a ear for melody" instead of "an ear for melody". I am following from now on and looking forward to more poems from you!!

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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnq Surab Aud 55 for your encouraging words

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      Word 2 years ago from Chicago

      Wonderful poetry here. You've good rhythm. Loving it!

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      Audrey Howitt 2 years ago from California

      Beautifully penned!

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      Surabhi Kaura 2 years ago

      Sujaya,

      Well-written! I loved this masterpiece. I wish to write like this too. Just pure beautiful... sublime. Hats off!

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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnq Jo Shp

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      Hari Prasad S 2 years ago from Bangalore

      great poetry sujay.

      - hari

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      John Hansen 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Beautiful poem Suj. Well done.