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Love moment!

Updated on October 30, 2015
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With the advent of poetic love

into my prosaic life

every moment glitters

with spangles delight

worthying

indefinite space alight

while huddling romance

with definite time

as spacious timelessness spreads out

to the vast spacelessness,

with a firm hold

on the thin line of momentous love,

eagerly waiting to engulf

the everlasting joy

of the wholesome life

of mine!

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      Venkatachari M 19 months ago from Hyderabad, India

      Nice lines with deep and intellectual meaning of the love moment.

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      John Hansen 19 months ago from Queensland Australia

      I like this one Suj. Well done.

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      Hari Prasad S 19 months ago from Bangalore

      beautiful love launch.

      - hari

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      Rachel L Alba 19 months ago from Every Day Cooking and Baking

      Reminds me of everlasting life. Very nice.

      Blessings to you.

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      Shubhro Sen 19 months ago from Howrah, West Bengal , India

      Lovely

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      Dana Tate 19 months ago from LOS ANGELES

      Love does make everything seem more beautiful.

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      Surabhi Kaura 19 months ago

      Beautiful.

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      sujaya venkatesh 19 months ago

      tnqll VM Jo 74 RLA Suj Dan Surbi

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      Larry Rankin 18 months ago from Oklahoma

      Wonderfully done.

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      sujaya venkatesh 18 months ago

      tnq Lar

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      FlourishAnyway 18 months ago from USA

      very pretty

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      sujaya venkatesh 18 months ago

      tnq Flo

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 18 months ago from Riga, Latvia

      A most delightful poem.

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      Eric Dierker 18 months ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      We have a saying here in the US from baseball. Because the best hit is a home run which is hit over the fence and out of the playing field park.

      You knocked this one out of the park my friend. It made me feel good to read it 3 times - thanks

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      sujaya venkatesh 18 months ago

      most thanks Gyp Eric

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      Shubhro Sen 18 months ago from Howrah, West Bengal , India

      lovely

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      sujaya venkatesh 18 months ago

      tnq Suj

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      Yoleen Lucas 18 months ago from Big Island of Hawaii

      I like tjis one a lot!

      I notice you've been writing a lot of love poems lately. What's going on?

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      sujaya venkatesh 18 months ago

      haha tnx Yes

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