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Lover On Hold

Updated on March 1, 2012

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When the day is long and love is gone

I am alone and left in the darkness

To which I sit and think what would it be like

To have a lover that would wait

That loves me so much there is no one else

That counts the days until we meet

Forgetting other relationships and wanting only me

To find one sweet lover filled with passion and endless desire

Enough to spend each day under the sheets and each night wined and dined by the fire

For a love like this is so special it takes two

When I am apart my eyes do not roam

I feel your presence and your comfort

I listen when you talk

I help when you need me and I boost you for a lift

I have your back and our love is I give and I can give some more

There is no pain or head games being played

Only a whisper of words that lead to the funnel of love

We are so different than most

We don't yell and scream

We reason and compromise when we disagree

Finding a middle ground that we can both accept

To watch our love expand and grow

Feeling free to let each other know

How we change as we grow old

Understanding and listening to what we need

So each day is not an open cut that bleeds

It is upside down and sometimes crazy

But always a friendship that is continually being molded

It takes lots of work and is never lazy

So each of us can trust and feel closer than ever

Because what we have is more than a fling

It is the real thing


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      DREAM ON 6 years ago

      Dim Flaxenwick I don't think I ever want to let you go.O.k. I know it couldn't last but at least I got a final hug.Until next time and many more hugs available then.Thanx so much.

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      Dim Flaxenwick 6 years ago from Great Britain

      AWESOME....... Dream On, you have really drawn the reader into your deep feelings here. Absolutely lovely.

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      DREAM ON 6 years ago

      raciniwa To enjoy and to give back.Living life with appreciation and gratitiude always.You are so right.To be in the moment what else could I ask for?Seeing other people as happy as me.:')

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      raciniwa 6 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      a love like that is like winning in the lottery...jackpot, you need not seek for more because your plate is full...

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      DREAM ON 6 years ago

      cleaner3 Will do.Life is too precious to waste I'm off like a rabbit finding mischief and excitement in every turn.I yearn for more.I can't imagine what next I am about to learn.moneycop It is so nice to see so many caring and thoughtful wonderful writers.Thanx so much and spring will be here soon when all the flowers will begin to bloom.Each day will get warmer and warmer.So enjoy with an open heart and lots of stories that we begin to start.

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      moneycop 6 years ago from JABALPUR

      i agreed wioth cleaner...he is really having a clear vision and we all must have to learn whole life and must accept to improve that right to every one of us...but the thiught and believe makes your writing more sound...carry on

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      cleaner3 6 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Go to the hub of cgetch, she has a pretty good style of write and poetry. she just published a hub titled a challenge in the midst. You will like it. but don't forget to read more of my work. A Time to remember, or something like that!!!Please feel free to give me feedback so I can know if I bring a smile to your face or even make you shed a small tear,even a tiny one, i want to know about it .(There I go rambling on)

      P.S you rhymed at the end of your line, you are learning already.LOL

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      DREAM ON 6 years ago

      Cleaner3 I will just have to practice,practice,practice.All your helpful hints and your clever eye would be much appreciated.I hope you don't mind if I pull up a chair and watch you at work. I promise not to get in your hair or make a sound. You will think I am not around.Thanx for the support and encouragement.

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      cleaner3 6 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you for your praise. you will soon become better than I. for I am but a humble rhymer who has to do it that way. just keep on writing . I can see the talent in your words . and don't adjust your own style, for that is what will make you unique. As I started with my own style and evolved you will most certainly evolve higher and higher as a great poet.

      Let your feelings and emotions flow

      don't be afraid to let your words go

      where they will take you

      and you will see

      the true beauty

      of your own poetry.

      Much Love


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      DREAM ON 6 years ago

      cleaner3 I have read a couple of your hubs and I see how you make everything flow and rhyme.I haven't learned that yet.My words come out choppy and sometimes I just don't want to let an idea go.So I work it till it fits and then I insist it has to be part of my story.I am learning from you and I am fascinated by your style.Thanx for the support I will keep trying to show you my talents and vision.Have a great day.

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      cleaner3 6 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Dream on, i am a lover of words and I have fallen in love with your words. this is great expression of love for it tells how powerful the imagination is. Very nice.

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      DREAM ON 6 years ago

      Princess Prisca I am sure that wonderful man can't wait to hold you in his arms.Look into your eyes and make every day a wonderful surprise.Thanx so much.May your day be filled with excitement and endless pleasure.

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      Princess Prisca 6 years ago from Heaven living on Earth

      Dream On,

      This is so beautiful. I am awaiting my 'Lover On Hold' and I can't wait until we meet...

      Thank you for sharing this poem, it's encourging.


      Ciao...Princess Prisca