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Lovers At Sea (poem)

Updated on September 13, 2016

Lovers at sea

Nothing to be

Nowhere to flee

Trapped aimlessly

Eyes cannot see

How to get free

Their destiny


Taking its fee

Losing the key

Doorway to glee

Times happily

Lost memory

Lost soulless plea

Lost to this sea


But waves kiss the shore

Of paradise close by

Bath in the sunlight

Of promised forever





Lovers at sea

Nothing to be

Nowhere to flee

Trapped aimlessly


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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      This is a remarkable style that one can easily get lost within. Good work!

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Lovely poem. Not sure how comfortable it would be, though. LOL

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      Victor W. Kwok 4 years ago from Hawaii

      Really great poem, martin.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Oh so beautiful Martin. Voted up ,across and shared.


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      DJ Anderson 4 years ago

      Brave Warrior,

      I tried it once, got sea sick and puked.

      We would like to hear more about your adventures......

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      There's nothing like making love 11 miles out to sea. Spent many a day doing just that!

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      DJ Anderson 4 years ago

      I'm just guessing here, but sounds like you need to learn how to swim! LOL

      Beautiful poem. Those crystal waters look so inviting.

      Wonderful song to accompany your prose.


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      Benjamin Chege 4 years ago

      Hi Mhatter99

      . Lovely poem. Voted up and beautiful. This reminds me of the day I met by better half. Was always thinking of her.

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      To be lost in love is as beautiful as the deep blue sea ... looks so calm and peaceful. Lovely music.

      Up and more and sharing

      God bless, Faith Reaper

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      Devika Primić 4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Lovers at sea, what better time to rekindle