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Low Battery

Updated on August 29, 2012
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In the wee hours of the morn
She was torn between two pillows
Pure ecstasy escalates;
A blinking Indicator become
A disruptive behavior: suddenly
A dishonorable discharge

Sorry low battery.

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      Annie 4 years ago from NewYork

      thank you for commenting

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      Justin W Price 4 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      Brilliant. Great word choice!

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      Annie 5 years ago from NewYork

      sometimes in poetry is better not to show, you allowed your audience to

      use his/her brain.

      thank you so much for reading..

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      Hitesh Bubbar 5 years ago from New Delhi, India

      Did you forget to add more stuff in it? lol! ;)