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Lyrical Poet

Updated on March 16, 2012



Blue, Blue was all I knew

There I was all alone,

no words to say to someone new

my heart had been turned into stone



There you came, with your sledgehammer

and you hit my heart so hard

you made me stammer.



Then you slowly put it back together

As your love words touched me

with a touch as soft as a feather.



You left me speechless, no words to say

although... this was the way

i liked to play,



Throwing thoughts to and fro

back and forth we would go.

Trying to see who would win

looking for love, it was no sin.


Now we are together, happy as can be

for how long we will wait and see,

but for now

our love is all soft and flowery.




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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Max, thanks for the visit and the kind words for my pooetry. i'm so glad you like them.

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      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Wow, man, you just blew my mind away, such a strong power of words! I even stopped breathing for a moment from the shock, amazing (in capitals). =)

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      raciniwa, thank you for visiting my hubs.

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      Love is all that matters...simply amazing Michael...

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      misshill 5 years ago from United States

      Beautiful poem, enjoyed reading it.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      acaetnna, thank you my Lady of Rhyme, your comments are always good. that smile of yours is so sweet, I wish I could keep it for my next love.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Totally incredible , as always!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Dreamer, thanks for your comments and unwavering support. Yes, i have turned positive. I want to write of a love that is fresh and nice , but love isn't always happy!!

      Michael

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      Jen Christopherson 5 years ago from Oklahoma, USA

      Wow! Such a change from the dark and lonely places we've been! I like it here, it's nice!

      Hope to see more like this one, but I love the others too!!!

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      ridhima 5 years ago

      this was really nice

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      KatrineDalMonte 5 years ago

      Wow, this is so great! So happy to read about your positive transformation. Keep believing, never fearing...

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      sam209 5 years ago

      Your work is awesome man!