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My Blocked Mind : Haiku's Collection III

Updated on July 7, 2017
"Hei, you! Yes, you!"
"Hei, you! Yes, you!"

Writer’s block


Stuck, won’t move a bit

So cruel locked me in it

No more spring will left


"I wonder what are you doing."
"I wonder what are you doing."

Writer’s block II


Words move from my mind

Through ear, tinkling on the floor

Gone, I am alone


"I miss you"
"I miss you"

After strong debate


I sleep, he sleep, we

Both need to rest, too much now

Debate must close, sleep!


"and can't wait to hear from you"
"and can't wait to hear from you"

Broken Heart


Fall on Roses bed

Wrapped by thorny embraced

Winter sedated


"How long do I have to wait?"
"How long do I have to wait?"

Uncertainity


How far it will be

Steep road under winter breeze

No estimation


"Damn! You kinda taking long!"
"Damn! You kinda taking long!"

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    I'm glad you like it, Sunchild28. Thank you. ^^

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    sunchild28 6 years ago from Nigeria

    very funny pictures and funny hub too.Broken hearts fall on roses bed.

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    Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you, Nighthag. :)

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    K.A.E Grove 6 years ago from Australia

    A great collection :)

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Thank you, Marie Louise. Welcome to my Hub. I am happy you like it. :)

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    Marie Louise 7 years ago

    Love your work! This had everythin it need and more!

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Sa'ge, the writer's block was your idea, remember? And for the rose bed, I really do not want to give up on that so I move the words again. Still I feel unsatisfied! :(

    I am too stubborn or what? LOL

    Thank you, dear. Hug back! :x

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    Sa`ge 7 years ago from Barefoot Island

    Oh Freya, Freya, why do you day you did not follow the discipline, for you did without any reason LOL you have given the season, and the place and the emotion, You have painted a moment and froze it for us all to feel and see,

    Girl you did what you started out to, haiku you wanted to write and haiku you did produce. Beautiful and funny and reflective of you and your moment with haiku. hehehe

    I loved it!... you got! you did it!.....

    I think I broke you buttons hehehe.... oh, those pictures so adorable and delightful. :D hugs :D

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Ah, that is good if I can make you smile. Thank you, Sir. :)

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    nifty@50 7 years ago

    You made me smile! I needed that, thanks Freya!

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hi, King Micky. Yes, those children really cute. I put those pictures to drive away attention from my unsatisfactory Haiku. LOL. Go! Go! Chicken dance! Please do make another record on chicken dance, King Micky! ^_*

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    Micky Dee 7 years ago

    Oh Freya! You made me chicken dance again! I had to do the tango on the funny button! That child! Oh my! YOU! HAIKU! DEAR!

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hi, Chris. Lol. And funny pic, right? Thank you, Sir.

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    carolina muscle 7 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

    Hai!! A very Nice Haiku!! :-)

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    No restriction? Hmm... that is not what I learn. But I hope you are right. Thank you, SilentReed. :)

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    SilentReed 7 years ago from Philippines

    Life is a Haiku / the rules of the discipline / to free, not restrict....... :) it takes time ...patience

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    Freya Cesare 7 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

    Hi, SilentReed. I never thought I have enough sense of humour but I'm glad if turned out I have one. :) This Haiku in the other hand, really giving me frustration. The rule to strict and I feel my reach is too tight. Not good enough. Therefore, for one frustrated move, I bent all the rule and wrote all I have in mind. Soooooo far from good! Hhhhh... but unless it still able to read and those pictures hopefully can cover the lack. LOL

    Thank you for your encouragement. I really appreciating it. :)

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    SilentReed 7 years ago from Philippines

    Hi Freya, The pictures made me smile and your Haikus reveal your sense of humor. I especially like this..Through ear, tinkling on the floor / gone, I am alone.....very zen. Zen masters are famous for their sense of humor.