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Madness (tanka)

Updated on May 30, 2015

Darkness claimed the night

When victim fell into lair

Of madness and death

And with the last screams was heard

Forgive me for what I am


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      Shauna L Bowling 24 months ago from Central Florida

      Hopefully he was saved by his final plea.

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      The Examiner-1 24 months ago

      I guess that it was his last plea for help.


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      Lee Cloak 24 months ago

      Brilliantly crafted, a really dramatic piece, very enjoyable, thanks, Lee

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 21 months ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Powerful words and image. Well done!

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