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Make me A Paragon of Your Love. To Deb Hirt. By Manatita

Updated on September 2, 2014
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Manatita is an esteemed author living in London, UK. He writes spiritual books, flash fiction and esoteric poetry, his favourite genre.

To: - Deb Hirt (Avian Novice).

For your heart of sweetness, devotion to animals,

photography and like me, a positive dreamer in this stream of life.

Out of a quagmire of past suffering,

I am now freed from sorrow and taste joy.

I was once caught in an abyss of misery;

Lost in a tunnel of painful shadows.

But now our Love is all the more meaningful,

And my heart is deeply thrilled.

Sweet Blossom, sitting like this together,

It is as if the bitter past, were never there.

As we gaze into each other’s Soul,

Let us entwine the closeness of our bond, which,

Augmented by Your magnificence, constantly flourishes.

celestial kiss


Your wondrous Love, like the melody of a harp,

Permeates my being, sweetly resonating

A river of celestial music, afloat in its delight.

Beloved, You’re limitless and boundless;

Your smile as gentle as the cool breath of spring.

A sparkled radiance rushes into my heart’s flower,

Blossoming petals one by one.

Go not away, Adorable One,

And if perchance You do, as sometimes happens,

Do not tarry too long.

You know that all mortals age with each passing day.

I’ve wanted to be a paragon of love,

Since the day that You flooded me with Peace.



meditative music

Sweet Serenity, I feel Your quintessence,

Into the very air I breathe.

Your touch, Your gaze … o great Lover;

Every moment is pervaded by Your Essence.

Keep my thoughts at Your lotus feet.

Let me be free from all manner of temptations,

An archetype of supernal Bliss,

Making my pilgrimage to Your sacred Sanctum,

The sole purpose of my quest.

-Manatita 29/5/2014. Copyrighted.

infinite joy


Let us Make Models of Love

We Are Positive Soldiers on The Path to Love. Right?

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      manatita44 3 years ago from london

      I seem to remember you as a lover of Peace yourself, Faith.

      Thank you kindly for your charming sentiments. God's peace be with you this Sunday evening here in London, UK.

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Aw, such beautifully expressed words, and I just love Deb too and her love for God's little creatures, birds. She is a beautiful person.

      Voted up and more, tweeting and pinning

      Peace to you and may God bless you always

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      manatita44 3 years ago from london

      Very happy that you are here, Deb.

      So pleased that I managed to make this one of my better ones.

      Aspiration we all have. Aspiration is the beginning and the end of this Purusha and Prakruti, this Alpha and Omega; this birthless and endless journey.

      I wish you God's peace. Let us pray for one another. Om Shanti!

      Kevin~ Welcome and thank you, Kevin. So kind of you. Be blessed!

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      The Examiner-1 3 years ago

      That was a loving poem and also adorable. it gets a thumbs up and shared.


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      Deb Hirt 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Thank you my friend…those are mighty tall words that I only hope to partially aspire.

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      manatita44 3 years ago from london

      Thank you for the blessing from God, Sparrowriter. I need and appreciate this. Let us pray for one another.

      Gratitude for your wonderful sentiment. Much peace.

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      rdsparrowriter 3 years ago

      Wow ! Just amazing :) God bless you more as you keep on encouraging wonderful writers :)

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      manatita44 3 years ago from london

      Gypsy - Thank you so much, Gypsy.

      have a great week-end!

      Victor - So happy that you like this poem. Lots of love to you this week-end.

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      Victor W. Kwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

      Amazing tribute, Manatita. Engagingly wonderful poem!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. An incredible and colorful poetic journey. Wonderful tribute.

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      manatita44 3 years ago from london

      Hi Dee. Where are you?

      Anyway. Always great to hear from you and wishing you lots of blessings this week-end.

      Blossom- Thanks Blossom.

      Good to see you. Appreciation for your continuous encouragement.

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      Dora Weithers 3 years ago from The Caribbean

      If anyone can create an image of a paragon in love, you can. Beautiful as always!

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      What a great tribute to another hubber. It's a beautiful poem and the images are good, too.

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      manatita44 3 years ago from london

      So sweet of you to say so. Much joy to you, Rubs. Salaam!

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      This too is another beautiful poetic piece. Your words are amazing. The pictures spellbinding. Loved it!

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      manatita44 3 years ago from london

      Thank you so much, Bill.

      Have a great evening! Higher Blessings.

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      Bill Holland 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Another lovely tribute to a very deserving writer. This is the perfect way to end my day. Let us carry on the fight for love.

      blessings always