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Make me error free, please!

Updated on April 17, 2015

Mistake not my slips,

my dear!

It isn’t my negligent attitude,

negligible pops they are

considering my love for you,

a wholesome love,

all embracing hits and flops alike;

a nod,

a look askance,

an upward curve of your lips

signal your

signature love;

my heart now is

afloat,

in the air,

held on suspension

due to your suspicion,

pricking it

with a pin of doubt,

you stand indebted

forever,

even otherwise,

my love!

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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnx vk

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      Victor W. Kwok 2 years ago from Hawaii

      Lovely, Sujaya.

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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnx do jo

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      Dora Isaac Weithers 2 years ago from The Caribbean

      Error free? Yes because even misguided effort comes from "a wholesome love." You tell such powerful stories in such few lines.

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      John Hansen 2 years ago from Queensland Australia

      I like this poem Sujaya, it is difficult to always do what your love wants. You can't please each other all the time. We all make mistakes.

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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnx jan

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      Janis Leslie Evans 2 years ago from Washington, DC

      This poem made me smile. It flutters and buzzes like a happy little bee. Isn't that how love goes sometimes, even when we make mistakes. :) Thanks for this delightful one, voted up and awesome.