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Me and my Lord

Updated on September 10, 2013
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Some of the greatest battles are fought

within the silent rooms... of your soul,

filled with some... of the darkest of coal

Many have lost..many have fallen,

strewn to the wind, like a flowers pollen

I will never give up...

I will never give in..

I and my Lord together

we will always win

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      Mary Craig 3 years ago from New York

      Yes Michael, I am sure you will always win. What a beautifully inspirational piece this is.

      Voted up, awesome, beautiful, and shared. For whatever reason the Pin It button is missing!

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you ..Mary.. happy you liked it.!

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      Eric Dierker 3 years ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      A treasure to red one thousand times. It strikes me that as short as the piece is because I just kept going back and reading it.

      Problem solved - I just printed it and put it on the board above my desk. But I will still be back.

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      wetnosedogs 3 years ago from Alabama

      Magnificent.

      Your trust and faith in the Lord shines so bright here.

      Best to you, Michael.

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you ..WND..

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      Jackie Lynnley 3 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Beautiful Michael, the Lord won first making it possible for us to. There is nothing so big we can't beat it with Jesus beside us. You said it well. ^ & sharing.

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Yes, I agree with wetnose, magnificent!!! I just finished reading your other phenomenal poem you published before this one, and I had written there that it was now my new favorite of your poems, but now.... You go and publish this beauty. Such an inspirational write here. Yes, He paid that highest price for all and He first loved us, so we are now able to love as He loves and find our strength for another day only in His strength.

      Thank you for this ... gives hope to all going through the trials of this life, that we all must go through, but with Him, we are able to make it through to the other side of those dark valleys.

      Up and more and beyond! Sharing, of course!

      Hugs and God bless you always,

      Faith Reaper

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      As Mary pointed out, there is no Pin, and I pin all the amazing writes I read here on HP to Pinterest. Hope you can get the Pinterest button, so I can share all of your poetry there on one of my boards.

      Hugs, Faith Reaper

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      Genna East 3 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

      Very inspirational with beautiful, stunning imagery. Voted up and more, and shared. :-)

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you ..Ericdierker... thank you for a great thought at the moment ..!

      like the way you write.. we have different styles .. but are close in many ways ..!

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you for reading .. Jackie .. loved your last poem about the Butterfly garden, it was beautiful and unique..!

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Faith .. thank you my dearest.. to have your lovely comments on my hub is a blessing.....indeed.

      I wish I had your strong conviction of The Lord's word.

      All I can do is write about everyday thoughts of life ..that I feel,

      knowing that with the Lord inside helping me .. I will be fine ..

      Michael

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you Geena East... glad to see you here !

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      rdsparrowriter 3 years ago

      That's the spirit Michael :) When all fail around you, only through Christ we can have great victory. God bless you!

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Inspirational, and with God on our side we will always win - what He wants us to win.

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Rochelle ... and Blossom for reading my work.!

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      Eric Dierker 3 years ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      Well as I have every day since you wrote this and I put it on my wall, I read it. Just thought I drop by again and say thank you.

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thanks Eric.. loved your last write also ..very inspiring .. for me ..

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      LChristiane 3 years ago from Florida

      Michael! "will never give up...I will never give in..

      I and my Lord together, we will always win"

      LOVE. Yes! Amen

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you my sweet..dancer.!

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      Dianna Mendez 3 years ago

      Wow, what a powerful statement. Yes, we will win with the Lord on our side. Love the opening photo. Pinned and voted up!

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      teaches.. thank you for the comment yes that photo expresses the feelings of the poem ..to me .

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