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Melting Hearts

Updated on September 13, 2010

My pretty little demon Devouring thy soul body & mind

You’re the wingless angel gathering my broken piece.

You seem to be the soil In my love’s budding flowers.

I see us beyond the frightening tree’s Of loneliness

Your all the colers from crayons on my minds coloring page.

You are much better than the mornings first drink...

You give to me the only reason to sleep and breath.

As well you’re the blue lines between all my ink..

Thank you for finally finding and keeping me..

And closing my hearts safety pin violent yet gentlly.

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      LilithMarie 7 years ago

      Omai luv that is very beautiful and it reaches deeply into my heart!

      ~Your Marie

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      kimberlyslyrics 7 years ago

      how cool - you are much better than the mornings drink

      this really touched me and

      way to go

      it just gets better and better

      thank you

      Kimberly

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      David Walston 7 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Thank You Very Much.

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      kimberlyslyrics 7 years ago

      damn.

      My hearts melting

      and my tummy all mushy

      not cool D.

      Loved it

      feel the rhythm in more than the obvious places

      thank you

      Kimberly

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      Ashley 7 years ago

      This is pretty

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      Sapphire Fisher 7 years ago

      David you really know how to touch a person don't you? Don't ever stop writting I loves ya!

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      nice one, awful poet

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      Sky321 6 years ago from Canada

      Hi Awful Poet, who is not Awful. My favorite line in this poem is -I see us beyond the frightening tree’s Of loneliness - because I can relate. I like all the other lines to. Thanks for sharing.

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      David Walston 6 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Good To Hear.

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      Stephiliboo 5 years ago from Liverpool, United Kingdom

      This is beautiful

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      David Walston 5 years ago from The Large Magellanic Cloud (LMC) (m-M)_0 = 18.41, or 48 kpc (~157,000

      Thank you Steph~

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