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Mess I Couldn’t Stomach (limerick)

Updated on May 18, 2014

So many-a young man has died

For things that I hold deep inside

Each night I would look

At mess freedom took

So lessons to cook right I tried

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      Karen Silverman 2 years ago

      Yeah..i'm of the belief that a little structure never hurt anyone..(lol)

      Good sunday morning M. You're in fine form, I seexx

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      Demas W Jasper 2 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

      For Sunday I thought you'd do better,

      For the weather couldn't get any wetter.

      While it held you inside,

      And rhyming you tried,

      More should come from a limerick pace setter.

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      truthfornow 2 years ago from New Orleans, LA

      At least you tried . . .

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      Victor W. Kwok 2 years ago from Hawaii

      Can't go wrong with a little bit of order.

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      Graham Lee 2 years ago from Lancashire. England.

      A nice smile here Martin.

      Graham.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Right off of the grill

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      Demas W Jasper 2 years ago from Today's America and The World Beyond

      should have read "our limerick pace setter."

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