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Michelle (poem)

Updated on September 29, 2012

When morning came Michelle was gone

Another wish had kissed the dawn

Yet as we dreamed what worlds were drawn

Enough to build lost lifetimes on

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Each heartbeat sparked a fantasy

Was this how all was meant to be

Each footstep formed a memory

Of this and more she meant to me

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Within her smile all doubt was gone

An endless flow of what could be

Delight upon our memory

As kisses called to carry on

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Then darkness challenged fantasy

As yesterdays began to dawn

And in their wake such tears were drawn

Enough to draw Michelle from me

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And so before time carried on

A kinder world were curtains drawn

Where flowers’ dew awaked the dawn

When morning came Michelle was gone

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      Mary Craig 

      4 years ago from New York

      So beautiful and so sad. I see Cam is thinking along the same lines I am.

      Voted up, awesome, and beautiful.

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      Chris Mills 

      4 years ago from Hartford, CT

      Well done, Martin. But how do you make sad sound so beautiful? I'm glad Audrey shared this.

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      Audrey Howitt 

      4 years ago from California

      Beautiful write!!

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      Lea Weikert 

      6 years ago

      As the owner of this picture and also the person in it, I ask that you please credit me (copyright Lea Weikert) and also add a link to my profile page (redbubble.com/people/leasphotos) As a starving artist, I really need and deserve the credit! I'm sure you understand.

      Sincerely,

      Lea Weikert

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      Michelle Liew 

      6 years ago from Singapore

      Ok, I have to comment on this since my name's in the poem! One of your most beautiful poems, Hatter. Heartfelt and well emoted!

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      rjsadowski 

      6 years ago

      You have a way with words. A beautiful poem.

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      A B Duncan 

      6 years ago from Somewhere on the Stage

      'Twas a beautiful poem and a fascinating rhyme structure. Well done!

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      Angelme566 

      6 years ago

      As expected your poems are all class A. So refreshing ! Voted all !

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      mizjo 

      6 years ago from New York City, NY

      Very beautiful and melancholy. Like the story of Guinevere and King Arthur. I wept for them. And I'm almost weeping for your bereft lover.

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      Houa Lor 

      6 years ago from Minnesota

      Wow, ths is so honest and beautiful.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 

      6 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. It's sad when we must part with someone. This was so wonderfully expressed. Passing it on.

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      Deb Hirt 

      6 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Very, very nice piece, and done so eloquently.

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      Martin Kloess 

      6 years ago from San Francisco

      thank you. this is Martin verse - an original form

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      Jessee R 

      6 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Memories and regrets go hand in hand... beautifully written verse..

      Vivid

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      picklesandrufus 

      6 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

      SO very well written. Your poem flows beautifully and is so loaded with imagery. Vote up!

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      Elena 

      6 years ago from London, UK

      Aaawh... beautifully written.

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      Suzette Walker 

      6 years ago from Taos, NM

      Beautiful poem and photo! Thank you for sharing this with us.

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      Merle Ann Johnson 

      6 years ago from NW in the land of the Free

      Love has touched you...:O) Hugs G-Ma

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      Kathy 

      6 years ago from The beautiful Napa Valley, California

      Absolutely gorgeous, Mhatter99...you really have a way with words...words which speak of a great love and respect...and a yearning which is palpable. very nice.

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      Akhand Pratap SIngh 

      6 years ago from Lucknow(U.P.) India

      Beautiful, very beautiful

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      slcockerham 

      6 years ago from Tallahassee, Florida

      Beautiful are your memories of love in poetry.

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      Ann1Az2 

      6 years ago from Orange, Texas

      Beautiful and melancholy are the words! Voted up and beautiful.

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      wewillmake 

      6 years ago from kerala-INDIA

      You are having the amazing ability to write.. I adore your work...

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      gottabegod 

      6 years ago

      Up, awesome & beautiful! Such heart and emotion in each line! I love it!

      God bless!

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      Dr Cil 

      6 years ago

      Such beautiful words!

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      LaThing 

      6 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      Truly beautiful! Memories are there, ...... do we move on or hang onto the past?!

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      Poetic Fool 

      6 years ago

      mhatter, this is simply one of the most beautiful poems I have read on HP in some time. It is just pregnant with emotion and dreams and crushed hopes. Really, very well done, my friend. I've bookmarked this one so I can come back again. Kudos to you!

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      Not Found 

      6 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      mhatter, this is beautiful.. memories will be stored forever in our hearts.

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      IsadorasThought 

      6 years ago

      Keep the memories and the memories will keep you.

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      oceansider 

      6 years ago

      Very beautiful!

      Voted up!

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      hi friend 

      6 years ago from India

      Really love the poem.

      Vote up

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