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Mirror: A Poem

Updated on December 24, 2013
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I've seen

Tender affections sweet as perfume;

Belated beauty in full-blossomed bloom;

Fresh, new love without ripple or seam,

Burning and brilliant as a hot laser beam.


I've seen

Cold silence when the love has died;

Beauty replaced by scorn and pride;

Broken promises and gnawing despair;

Shattered dreams beyond repair.

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      waqxi 5 years ago

      I love love the second part its so music

      Great job

      Waqxi

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      caitmo1 5 years ago from Lancashire England

      I like it!Voted up and beautiful.

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      epigramman 5 years ago

      .....love this hubtastic piece of writing - it's so impressionistic and you have an excellent craft of making words look/read so enticing and beautiful - bravo to you for this one, indeed!

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      Johnny Darklight 5 years ago from Cody Wyoming

      In your title I was pulled in. I love reflection emotion. I voted you up and beautiful.

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      Debby Bruck 5 years ago

      Dear Kate ~ I have hardly even done this, but I gave you TWO RATINGS - awesome and beautiful. So well written, rhymes and sentiment both in sync. Love, Debby P.S. because this was 'extra special' I tweeted to my enormous following.

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      Alexander Thandi Ubani 5 years ago from Lagos

      Wow! Felt every word as a stab. Great vision and choice of words. Awesome piece of poetry

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      Shampa Sadhya 5 years ago from NEW DELHI, INDIA

      Voted up and beautiful.

      A short piece of poem but very meaningful. I really liked it.

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      Faceless39 5 years ago from The North Woods, USA

      Thanks so much for all of your comments; I really appreciate the feedback! :)

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      Justin W Price 5 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      excellent work, Kate. I enjoyed this a lot!

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      Lee Cloak 2 years ago

      A lovely poem, very beautiful, thank you!

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