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Miss You So Strong

Updated on October 16, 2013
caught while composing.
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Miss You So Strong

By Chuck RitenouR 10-16-2013


Is it wrong that I should miss you so strong

every minute, every hour of every day ?

When love is new, what can someone do

to make the yearning go away?

I look into your face, the picture that I placed

on the mirror in the middle of my room

while in the mirror I see, the reflect that is me

knowing there is nothing I can do.

You have cast a spell and instantly I fell

under your bewitching charms.

and miss you so strong I will, right up until

You again, I hold in these loving arms.



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      ocfireflies 3 years ago

      Lovely poem filled with hope and enchantment...nicely done.

      Have a great day!

      Kim

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      Chuck RitenouR 3 years ago from Front Royal, Virginia

      ocfireflies,

      Thank you for dropping by and taking the time to leave an encouraging comment.

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      Shauna L Bowling 3 years ago from Central Florida

      Trust me, slow down. When we find what we think is love, the things we've avoided come forth, especially when we're older. I've been thru it. Slow down and don't cling - you'll scare her away.

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      Chuck RitenouR 3 years ago from Front Royal, Virginia

      bravewarrior,

      Sage advice. Thanks for dropping by and taking the time to comment. The encouragement I was referring to in ocfireflies response was to continue writing.

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