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Molten Silver Mist

Updated on February 22, 2012

Molten silver mist sent horizontally through the trees
Brightest, tenderness green; a slant of sun tangled in
Shouting of the water; powerful and incessant
Flow secretly and irresistible among the wet rocks
Hiss, splash, gurgles...
Rainbow sprays beautifully; purity absolute

Unearthly, rich, and drizzling; strange
Effect in lights and shades
Endless foliage has little miracle
Each leaves and branched bestowed
In ways unknown to any hours
Splendid and pleased; mother nature beauty


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      Cathy Nerujen 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Your words flow beautifully in this poem. I really enjoyed this. The mist and the forest comes alive in your words. I love the images too.

      I have discovered another Great Poet on Hub Pages. I am now a fan. :)

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      chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA

      Hello everyone, thank you very much for reading, commenting, and voting. Your comment means a whole lot to me! Thank you!


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      Mohan Kumar 5 years ago from UK

      your poetry is a visual delight, stunning the senses and gurgling through in a cascade of words like a mountain stream. love it! beautiful.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 5 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      a beautiful soothing poem.. so divine.

      voted up


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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Nicely done! Love those pics.

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      Karen Silverman 5 years ago

      pretty poem - stunning photos! Breathtaking!

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      Joyce Haragsim 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Beautiful poem and photos. Voted up and beautiful, Joyce.

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      europewalker 5 years ago

      Lovely expressive poem:)

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      Joanna Chandler 5 years ago from On planet Earth

      Very nice Excerpt

      Have a lovely week ;)

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      Ghaelach 5 years ago

      Morning Chanroth.

      A beautiful poem.

      LOL Ghaelach

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      shamela 5 years ago

      Hi chanroth,

      Your poem is beautiful.

      I voted your poem beautiful.