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Moment In Time (poem)

Updated on June 10, 2017

Blessing come true

Our moment in time

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There was time enough to hold you

To kiss you

To gaze into your eyes

To wander through the fields

Enchanted with your presence

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Time enough to laugh

Time enough to sing

Time enough to dance to

Dance through all that life had to offer

Each breath

Each heartbeat

Sweet moment in time

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As others complained

How short their time was

Sharing memories of moments

Quickly passed away

Then and now

Then and now

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We couldn’t understand

We couldn’t grasp what they were going through

Blaming it on dreams

Blaming it on lifestyles

Blaming it on everything but the truth

This moment in time

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So we lived our years

Years of holding

Years of kissing

Timelessly enjoying the dreams we cast

Our bound fashioned purpose for endlessness

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But then you died

To leave me alone with the price of it all

The price of those glorious lifetimes

The years of disappearing tears

Trapped by the wonder we enjoyed

My moment in time

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      John Hansen 3 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Very touching, beautiful. V+

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      FlourishAnyway 3 years ago from USA

      So incredibly beautiful. One day we will all either leave our partner alone or be left. I think about that.

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      Devika Primić 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      So beautifully expressed moment in time is truly a heartfelt.

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      Bill Holland 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Indeed! No more words are necessary. :)

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Beautiful and touching. I watched the video and felt sad that Patrick is no longer with us. Thank you for sharing...

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      ocfireflies 3 years ago from North Carolina

      Great description of how some moments never end. Thank You.

      Happy Thanksgiving,

      Kim

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Happy-sad, bitter-sweet memories so beautifully portrayed and never forgotten. Thank you for another lovely poem.

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Beautiful moments captured forever in time.

      Up and more and sharing

      Happy Thanksgiving,

      Faith Reaper

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      DJ Anderson 3 years ago

      Beautiful sentiments set to the rhythm of rhyme.

      There will be a joyous reunion, one day.

      I strongly believe.

      DJ.

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      Nell Rose 3 years ago from England

      Oh Wow, beautiful words, and such sadness too, loved it.

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      Carolyn Sands 3 years ago from Hollywood Florida

      Thanks for the poem. It is a nice love poem...but sad ending. I enjoyed reading it.

      Carolyn

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      Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

      Brilliant as always Martin.

      Eddy.

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      Victor W. Kwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

      Thanks for another brilliant, touching poem!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. Well this says it all and more. Sigh.... Passing this on.

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      Deb Hirt 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      All things end, which really shows us how mortal we all are. We must enjoy what we have, as long as we have it.

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