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Moments in Minutes

Updated on August 24, 2012


A Moment in time.....

words are Poetry in space

thats what I love ... when i see your face


Just your soft touch ...

brings such emotion

I just want to shout ...cause a commotion


My frozen heart it....

melts like ice

a wedding spree...complete with rice


Love isn't all....

joy and glee

like a coin flipped ..

only two sides to see


Passion is deep... sadness heavy

feelings held back...like from a levy


Slow erosion....

the walls of love...so strong

a broken heart...

can only last so long


Moments in Minutes...

Love...Heartbreak

Romance

All together..... they move

in Words.... Sweet Love Dance.









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      Skyler DeCristoforo 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Sweet love dances

      The romance entrances

      The moment advances

      And our hearts melt in our hands

      Awesome poetry!

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 4 years ago from Reno NV

      Very well done, keep up the good work. Thank you for sharing. Jamie

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ SkySlave, thank you for the comments and an addition that rhymes.

      @Jamie, thanks for the support and for the visit. glad you like my wqrite.

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      Ryem 4 years ago from Maryland

      This is the beauty of love...great poem!!

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Ryem, thank you for the visit and the wonderful comments.

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Stunningly beautiful piece here. Wow, you are a very gifted poet! Love this. Very powerful. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Faith Reaper, thank you for the visit and the lovely comments. I know you like inspirational poetry , so you must read some of my other writes .

      god bless you.

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      I do and I sure will precious one!!! In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      Wow... so sweet... the petals you spread before our feet

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Mhatter..... wow,

      didn't know you could rhyme

      next thing you know

      you will be answering in two lines

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      Princess Prisca 4 years ago from Heaven living on Earth

      Michael,

      I love this piece :-)

      So, how many moments are there in minutes...?

      You are alert to the fact of the 'strong walls' that surround love...

      It is that 'broken heart' that I am dwelling on :-(

      What can be done to mend a broken heart...?

      One may never find out where to start...

      It is one thing that I know for sure,

      One such as you, will always endure...

      The waiting process that puts us all to the test,

      Then we shall emerge at our very best :-)

      ***Don't you ever stop planting your words on these pages,

      Far too many beautiful things are growing...

      Much love,

      Princess Prisca

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      cleaner3 4 years ago

      my lovely Princess, Look at you !!! thank you for the visit. your comment is excellent , you know what I am going to write aren't you? you should take your sweet comment and put it into a sweet hub.

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      Linda Rogers 4 years ago from Minnesota

      What a romantic dance you write of, my friend. Love is an up and down, ebb and flow and it's worth every bit of it. Have a great weekend Michael.

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      Dianna Mendez 4 years ago

      Words have power and can be used to transcend time, especially poetry. Lovely words on how poetry is timeless.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Twin, hi, glad you have come for a visit. thanks for the kind comments.

      @ teaches, thanks for the comments.

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      Karen Silverman 4 years ago

      'like a coin flipped, only two sides to see'....You are such a gifted, passionate poet, Michael, and we both know that 2 sides doesn't even begin to fully describe or understand..very insightful and romantic..

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      K, thank you for the kind words. we have found something we agree on, love and poetry. love you girl.

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      rdsparrowriter 4 years ago

      A beautiful heart touching poem. Side effects of love. Look back and thank God. Look forward and trust in God Michael. God bless you!

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Rochelle.. god bless you ..

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