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Moon Take Me Back (poem)

Updated on September 15, 2013

Oh moon beyond tomorrow in her eyes

Take me back to linger softly midst those days

A fragrance so familiar filled the air

And hearts were flushed by touch of satin veil


Each mist

A drift

A wish



The promises

Unshaken now

The timeless now

Each sigh-filled now


Oh moon if your heart still beats

As when those promises were etched

Into souls

Cast in time

To a place

Take me back


In her eyes was everything

Searching for dreams to born

Into days

Beyond this


Take me back


Beyond tomorrow till now

When those unshaken promises were made

To live amid the air of always

Sailing through a sea of always

With every star a kiss of always

Take me back

To where I am


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      Dianna Mendez 4 years ago

      Ah, such a beautiful poem. I also love the music video as it sets the mood for this poetry.

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      I adore the thankfulness in your words...

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      Victor W. Kwok 4 years ago from Hawaii

      Amazing and beautiful.

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Once again so beautiul;voted up ,


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      Nithya Venkat 4 years ago from Dubai

      Beautiful, great poem.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      A lovely poem: from eternity to eternity.

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      Michele Travis 4 years ago from U.S.A. Ohio

      Another wonderful poem. Love it!

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 4 years ago from Reno NV

      Wonderful poetry. Jamie

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      Shauna L Bowling 4 years ago from Central Florida

      I like the rhythm in this one, Martin. It gets the heart racing then slows down to a peaceful place.

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      DJ Anderson 4 years ago

      A sensuous work filled with passion and longing.

      Another winner.

      You do give us your best every day.


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      ocfireflies 4 years ago from North Carolina

      a definite up and share

      Great job!


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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Oh, I love that "Oh moon beyond tomorrow in her eyes" ...

      Up and more and sharing

      Blessings, Faith Reaper

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      Devika Primić 4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      One can't hide their feelings the eyes is open to all feelings