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My Body Has No Eyes

Updated on September 8, 2011

My body has no eyes

My room has no windows

No breath, No vision

Bleeding this open incision


When will it change?

When will I grow?

I cannot take it anymore

I can’t find a new life door


Fine just yesterday

Fine the day before

Back in and what do you know

I was just a puppet in your show


Running and running

Walls after walls

I can’t find my light

I have lost all my sight


I hear a voice calling

I hear a voice say

Come to me my child

I opened my eyes and smiled


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    • bellawritter23 profile imageAUTHOR

      Erica Sanchez 

      7 years ago from California

      Epi, I have no words for you but just thank you. Nothing can describe the way your words reach my heart.

      bella

      P.S. Thanks for the compliment on my profile pic.

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      epigramman 

      7 years ago

      ....well you are truly one of the very few writers here at the Hub whom I put into the third category:

      1. there are a lot of good writers here

      2. there are a few really great ones

      3. and there are people (creative anomalies) like you who fit into a unique category of their own by creating their own very unique language ...

      lake erie time ontario canada 2:54pm always a pleasure to arrive here and be caressed by your words and I really 'dig' your profile picture - if they didn't invent 'sex appeal' yet then you beaten them to it!

    • bellawritter23 profile imageAUTHOR

      Erica Sanchez 

      7 years ago from California

      sUNSHINE i HAVE DEARLY MISSED YOU OH SO VERY MUCH!!! WELL MORE LIKE IN THE DARK HEADING FOR THE LIGHT LOL

      SMILES :)

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      Nikki Wicked 

      7 years ago from Louisiana

      hmm interesting...going over to the darkside a bit there at the end maybe?

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      Poetic Fool 

      7 years ago

      No need to apologize, bella. I simply meant it was effective in drawing me in to read the poem.

    • bellawritter23 profile imageAUTHOR

      Erica Sanchez 

      7 years ago from California

      Poetic, My apologies for the creepiness. lol thank you for the very wonderful comment you left it always is nice to read the thoughts behind other great writers/poets.

      Asma, Thank you again for your wonderful comment. It places smile of joy!!

      bella

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      asmaiftikhar 

      7 years ago from Pakistan

      deep and sensitive thought provoking poem.keep it up

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      Poetic Fool 

      7 years ago

      Bella, the great title drew me in and the poem did not disappoint. The picture is a bit creepy but it fits with the title and was part of the draw. Another wonderful piece from you. Voted up and awesome.

    • bellawritter23 profile imageAUTHOR

      Erica Sanchez 

      7 years ago from California

      Firechick, Thank you was dealing with a whole lot so this helped me through my day.

      bella

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      firechik211 

      7 years ago

      Very well written.

    • bellawritter23 profile imageAUTHOR

      Erica Sanchez 

      7 years ago from California

      Oh that darn depression Car. I hate it sometimes but honestly thats when I do my best work why is that?? Happy Friday!!

      bella

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      Carolee Samuda 

      7 years ago from Jamaica

      This reminds me of when I was depressed...but it seems more like a birth or rebirth. Wonderful!

    • bellawritter23 profile imageAUTHOR

      Erica Sanchez 

      7 years ago from California

      Ace, I still have not found love and struggle. I have made a choice to re enter my spiritual domain and stay rooted from here on out. I have come to find that I am not fully healed from my past life and am still learning to let it go but until that happens I will find inner peace and then I will meet my prince charming for I am not emotionally ready for him. I know it now. Thanks for your kind words they are very filling to the ear and places huge grins on my face.

      smiles always

      bella

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      acaetnna 

      7 years ago from Guildford

      Your heart is always open and your words explain it all. I hope you are happy Bella and are enjoying true love.

    • bellawritter23 profile imageAUTHOR

      Erica Sanchez 

      7 years ago from California

      Writer, Thank you :)

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      writer20 

      7 years ago

      This a great wonderful poem, thank you bella puppet.upup

    • bellawritter23 profile imageAUTHOR

      Erica Sanchez 

      7 years ago from California

      Bellataylor I kinda have an idea of who you may be lol Thanks I appreciate you taking the time and reading!! ;)

      smiles

      bella

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      bellataylor 

      7 years ago

      WoW! Really great ;)

    • bellawritter23 profile imageAUTHOR

      Erica Sanchez 

      7 years ago from California

      Mamadrama, Thank you. I have visited this place a few times you would think I would have learned... thanks for stopping by!

      smiles :)

      bella

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      Mamadrama 

      7 years ago from Upstate NY

      Beautiful! I think at least once, we have all felt this lost. You really touched a part of me that I was dealing with at one time in my life. Amazing imagery and feeling!

    • bellawritter23 profile imageAUTHOR

      Erica Sanchez 

      7 years ago from California

      B., Thank you we all aren't we at some point or another :)

      thanks B.,

      bella

    • b. Malin profile image

      b. Malin 

      7 years ago

      What a Wonderful line Bella, "I was just a Puppet in your show". Maybe we all are to a degree. The picture is a 1,000 words. Wow, on this one and a Vote UP!

    • bellawritter23 profile imageAUTHOR

      Erica Sanchez 

      7 years ago from California

      Leann, is this wow good or bad kinda nervous?? lol Thanks for reading either way

      bella

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      leann2800 

      7 years ago

      ...wow!

    • bellawritter23 profile imageAUTHOR

      Erica Sanchez 

      7 years ago from California

      Thank you T.C. I am happy you enjoyed it!!

      smiles :)

      bella

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      Tom Cornett 

      7 years ago from Ohio

      Wonderful work! Made me feel...and...smile. :)

    • bellawritter23 profile imageAUTHOR

      Erica Sanchez 

      7 years ago from California

      Thank you very much!!

      bella

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      sariasam 

      7 years ago

      Wow...the title is superb & attractive.

      http://stores.ebay.com/Shears-and-Scissors

    • bellawritter23 profile imageAUTHOR

      Erica Sanchez 

      7 years ago from California

      Qud, I am sorry for that didn't mean to. thanks for the comment as always you are simply the best.

      F., Yes that is exactly it. We astray and take different paths everyday isn't that the woes of life that we can make our own decisions to live and make the wrong decisions to learn?

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      7 years ago

      Ty. I thought so! Your message is, we need to be reconciled to our God, right?

      Blessings.

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      QudsiaP1 

      7 years ago

      Woah, the picture freaked me out a little.

      Fiercely written.

    • bellawritter23 profile imageAUTHOR

      Erica Sanchez 

      7 years ago from California

      Thank you and the voice is my creater calling to take me by my hand!!

      bella

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      7 years ago

      Interesing poem!

      So whose voice is this...?

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