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My Empty Mind

Updated on July 29, 2013

Let me show you the colors...

of my broken heart

let me give you all...of the lifeless parts

The pieces heavy ...with sorrow and pain

where only the lonely,

doth... write refrains

Take them my sweet... keep them free

from light ..

in the darkness many want...

through the longest night

If you must ...also

take my long lost soul,

fill it with all... the love that you know

I need in my heart ..in my empty mind

If you would only...

be so kind.

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    • cleaner3 profile image
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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Eddi.. you are appreciated for your visits to my work .

      You inspire all with your poetry and the different forms you create .

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Wonderful words Michael ; voting up and sharing.

      Enjoy your day.

      Eddy.

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Oh, bless your heart, I did not realize you were waiting, for I would have shown up earlier and left a more profound comment as to such lovely poetry.

      Hugs, Faith Reaper

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank You... Faith .. been waiting for you to get here ..

      wanted to see what you would write..

      love and Hugs ...

      Michael

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Beautifully vivid portrayal of one's heart and mind condition.

      Voted up ++++ and sharing

      God bless you,

      Faith Reaper

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      blossom ..thank you ..for the comments..

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      Jackie Lynnley 4 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Thank you and bless you.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Beautiful poetry and you express your thoughts so well. Thank you for sharing them in this way.

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Jackie... thank you for the visit ...

      Rest is over exaggerated.. when the words come to you .. you must write..

      I am so filled with the spirit of poetry.. I am inspired by the smallest thing any more .. a picture .. a song.. a phrase....

      When you start to feel your own mortality, it is frightening. I want to get these poems out before ..I should have to go .... then only the lord, his angels and me and myloved ones that have passed, will read my poems together . what ecstasy awaits ..

      Bless you Jackie .

      michael

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ dghbrh... thank you for your wonderful comments .. they are appreciated.

      @ James .. thanks for the visit and the comments

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      Jackie Lynnley 4 years ago from The Beautiful South

      You write as if your heart never rests! ^

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      Tijani Achamlal 4 years ago from Morocco

      I love this poem.. its flows really nicely and its written so well.. it paints a beautiful picture .

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      wowwww such a hear felt one here......Its very beautifully done....my favs are.....

      '...........If you must ...also

      take my long lost soul,

      fill it with all... the love that you know

      I need in my heart ..in my empty mind...'...if only my mind becomes empty .....!!!!

      Shared and votes up

      peace and happiness your way.

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Aww... I know you would.

      Well, I'm signing off dear! I'll have to catch up on some more of those beautiful hubs of yours in the morning.

      Nighty night sugar plum :D

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      and I yours .. My Kitty Cat..

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      Cat 4 years ago from New York

      Michael,

      This was certainly worth the wait! Now I have to see if I can fall asleep with tears in my eyes... this is beautiful! You ought to know by now, I very much understand this. If I could, I would take all of your sorrow and pain.

      Up and more ~ Sharing too!

      Hugs,

      Cat