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My Empty Reflection

Updated on February 22, 2013

"Who are you?" I said.

"I am you." she whispered.

"Well, I don't know you." I replied.

Cast into a midnight lagoon
Above the glow of the full moon
Is my own empty reflection
Living in the soulless of her own.


Staring into this vast unknown
Is a dark beauty I call my own
That love has broken and left alone
To face the apocalypse he had shown.


The echoes of bittersweet pawn
On this so-called love destiny’s loan
Haunted my memories to its zone
To wait for the breaking dawn.


All alone in this midnight lagoon
Lost in crying under the full moon
Staring on my empty reflection
To live again in the soulless of her own.


© 2012 Mycee. All Rights Reserved.

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      kjforce 5 years ago from Florida

      Beautifully written and very deep..great way with the words..

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      Angelo52 5 years ago from Central Florida

      Nice poem. up +

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      Shauna L Bowling 5 years ago from Central Florida

      Unknown, are you likening soulless to solace?

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      Jennifer Vasconcelos 5 years ago from Cyberspace and My Own World

      Very deeply moving poem Unknown Spy. It evokes a feeling of empathy in me.

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      Audrey Howitt 5 years ago from California

      Beautifully written!

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      Olde Cashmere 5 years ago from Michigan, United States

      A very moving poem Unknown Spy, beautiful imagery in your words. Keep up the great writing, it gets better and better. Voted up and beautiful (:

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      thank you so much kj force..your comment means a lot to me.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      wow!! nice to see a + sign :))

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      hi bravewarrior..its soulless i choose; the absence of warmth of mind/feeling of one's self..

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      im so glad to hear that you like my poem..Thnak you Jlava :)

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you soooooo much Audrey! Really appreciate your kind words.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      you're such an angel! you inspired me to write, though im a frustrated writer.. hehe. writing doesnt seem to like me :)

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      Rosalinem 5 years ago from Nairobi, Kenya

      So moving, I can almost touch the sadness. Voted up and awesome.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thanks much Rosaline... thank you

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      Nithya Venkat 5 years ago from Dubai

      Great poem with a big impact. Loved it.Voted up and shared.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Wow! Nice to hear this Vellur. You made me smile even though with all these stress right now. Thanks much!

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      Rowie Rillera 5 years ago from Philippines

      I Love the poem. very well written.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you so much!!!

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      Krowie 5 years ago from Phils.

      I can also feel the emptiness hiding in your poem. Very good work.

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      IAmForbidden 5 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thanks Krowie.. I really appreciate that you take time reading my hubs.

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      Movie Master 4 years ago from United Kingdom

      Wow, your poetry is beautiful!

      Voting up/beautiful

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      MM, thank you so much for appreciating my poetry. :) Have a nice day!

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      Annie Fenn 4 years ago from Australia

      The emptiness of despair captured beautifully in the empty reflection. Beautifully written and hauntingly sad. My votes to you, Unknownspy and sharing.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you so much Annie. ^;^

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      Graham Lee 4 years ago from Lancashire. England.

      Hi US. I have read several of your lovely hubs. It seems that you are seeking that certain someone. Please don't be sad, one day he will be there and the sun will shine so brightly in that Midnight Lagoon.

      Voted up.

      Graham.

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Hi Graham.. No sir, im not seeking for a certain someone, I just love to write about these kinds of topic. I am in a relationship for 6 years now, and hoping we'll be together for a lifetime :))

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      wonderfully written spy

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      Thank you Rah :)

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