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My Eyes My Face My Soul

Updated on February 24, 2012

I Want to thank Katrine Dal Monte for the inspiration of this poem

A Good Look

I've heard It said that the

The Eyes are the pathway to the Soul

You want to see, what my Eyes see

take a good look now,

will you see the reality


As you look straight into my Face

take a good look now

my Eyes will tell of the places

that hurt deep inside

will you find the pathway

where the hurt resides.


If you really want to see my Soul

look into my Face, see my Eyes

take a good look now

will you understand what makes me wise

you will see the color of my Soul

take a good look now

look at my Face as a whole.


Want to see the pain in my Eyes

take a good look now

will you will be suprised

when you see the emotion of my Soul

the rivers of pain there that flow


my Eyes will show you the pain

my Face will show you the fire

my Soul will show you the emotion

of my words, that fuel my desire.





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    • cleaner3 profile image
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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Rosemay, thank you for reading my poetry, try the others. you are right about those eyes.

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      Rosemary Sadler 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      A beautiful poem. Windows to the soul, the eyes never lie.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      moneycop, you have come into my poetry house with comments of praise. thank you

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      moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR

      love to read this poem and the picture of girl with beautyfull eyes..go on..i look forward to read many more insights from u

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Thank you Blossom, don't glimpse just come right in.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 5 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      We used to say 'the eyes are the windows of the soul' and you have given a great poem to glimpse in through that window. Voted up.

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      Nikki Wicked 5 years ago from Louisiana

      as long as you are cool :) its good in my book lol

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      I am a cool rhyming artistical hot blooded Latino poet.

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      Nikki Wicked 5 years ago from Louisiana

      ha idk what is up with that. and its a nice photo. you look like a cool biker dude lol.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Your eyes don't lie that is me in full fault.

      I kept trying to send you a pic but the internet or your e mail account wouldn't let it go through.

      what do you think?

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      Nikki Wicked 5 years ago from Louisiana

      The eyes tell us so much about a person, but I guess I am no good at seeing through the surface usually. Sometimes we just see what we want to see.. Beautiful poem. and i never got that photo through email. Is that you in your default?

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Ruby,thank you for your comments, they are appreciated

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Beautiful, Voted up and awesome...

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Katrine DalMonte, I want to thank you for your inspiration. I am still trying to find the other 975 words for my other poems.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Caroline, hello gorgeous, thank you for lifting me up when I needed it. You are always there when I need your words of encouragement.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ shamela, thank you for your kind words.

      @Kamalesh, thank you for visiting. glad you like my hub.

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      Gorgeous doll.

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      KatrineDalMonte 5 years ago

      Yes Michael, eyes are the mirror of our soul, and face the reflection of our world...they can tell thousands of silent words...

      Great poem :-)

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      Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

      Beautiful poem. Voted Up.

      Best Wishes, Kamalesh

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      shamela 5 years ago

      Hi cleaner3,

      Your poem is beautiful.

      I voted your hub beautiful.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      jabez, thanks for your kind words. glad you liked it.

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      jabez3 5 years ago

      Good poem!