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My Mind Was Other Places Poem

Updated on May 6, 2012


Why don’t you talk to me

I am sorry baby my mind is in other places

Let’s talk about when we met

I am sorry baby my mind is in other places

Didn’t you see my frown

I am sorry baby my mind was in other places

Is this all I will get

I am sorry baby my mind is in other places

Why did you let me down

I am sorry baby my mind was in other places

Let me bid you goodbye

Please excuse me baby my mind was in other places



I will not sweetheart my mind is now in other places

Please talk to me baby

I will not sweetheart my mind is now in other places

I love you I am sorry

It is too late for us my heart is in other places




Sorry sweetheart we can only be familiar faces



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      Audrey Howitt 2 years ago from California

      Sometimes we just seem to miss each other --ships passing--nicely done!

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      Madeleine Salin 4 years ago from Finland

      Sometimes we need to move on to another place than we first intended. Nice poem.

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      Kimberly Lake 5 years ago from California

      @Vinaya Ghimire Thank you for the kind comment. I am glad you enjoyed my poem.

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      Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

      Hello Kim

      I loved the unity of composition. This is a beautiful poem to read just before going to bed.

      1:05 AM Kathmandu

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      Kimberly Lake 5 years ago from California

      @Poetic Fool Thank you, I wrote this after realizing I needed to pay more attention to my family. At times I am distracted, I also know from experience, that when you are distracted you miss a lot. I have been hurt by people doing this same thing to me and had to break off the relationship. I am glad you enjoyed my poem, I appreciate your comment and taking the time to read my hubs.

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      Poetic Fool 5 years ago

      Many, I fear, find themselves in this situation but never have the courage to say goodbye and in your poem. They're forever hopeful their partners mind will return home. It's a tough realization and decision to make. Your poem expresses this beautifully, Kimberly!

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      Kimberly Lake 5 years ago from California

      @Vellur Thanks for your continued support, I hope you enjoyed it.

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      Nithya Venkat 5 years ago from Dubai

      Great poem, a new angle to "mind in other places".

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      Kimberly Lake 5 years ago from California

      @SandraBusby Thank you for the comment, I am glad you liked my poem. It is good to follow your thoughts and see where they take you. It can be an adventure.

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      Sandra Busby 5 years ago from Tuscaloosa, Alabama, USA

      Yes, our minds can be anywhere and sometimes we must follow them. Lovely poem. Sandra Busby

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      Kimberly Lake 5 years ago from California

      @uzma shaheed Thanks so much for reading and commenting. I am happy that you found my poem interesting.

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      Kimberly Lake 5 years ago from California

      @WB Thank you for the positive comment, I am some what of a shy poet. I appreciate the encouragement.

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      Wayne Brown 5 years ago from Texas

      A poetic sense that you are no longer in one you loves consiousness...lost to their heart, touch, and thought...suddenly a cruel awareness. Nicely done! WB

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      Uzma Shaheen Bhatti 5 years ago from Lahore,Pakistan

      oh! how much our minds wander? very interesting and different poem. voted up.

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      Kimberly Lake 5 years ago from California

      @Ruchira Thank you! My mind wanders too, that is what prompted me to write this. Yes, thankfully god is not like us, but we should be more like him.

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      Ruchira 5 years ago from United States

      thank god for his patience...lol

      for mind wanders so much that it's difficult to stay in the present.

      good one Kimberly!

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