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My Savior Who I Cannot See

Updated on August 10, 2017

To the savior who I cannot see

Forever by my side You’ll be

Watching over my life in progress

Forever you seem to always bless

My life when I feel I have no clue

Keeping track of all I do


One day I’ll meet you face to face

I hope my life will not be a disgrace

Sometimes I know I let You down

Sometimes I forget You are always around

You know the great person I can be

I love my savior I cannot see


And one day the loud sound of your return

Will mark the day of who will live and who will burn

The day we share a place in Your Kingdom

So we must focus on “thy will be done”

For it won’t be long for all this to be

Thanks for all You have done my savior I cannot see

As I look back at some of my older poetry I realize how much I have changed. How some of my writing is the same. But a lot of it is different now as well. One thing is for sure, I am still a firm believer of our Savior we cannot see.

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      Ryan Fuller 3 years ago from Louisiana, USA

      Thanks LadyFiddler. I am glad that you enjoyed this. Thanks for stopping by.

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      Joanna Chandler 3 years ago from On planet Earth

      This is awesomely beautiful.

      Thanks for sharing.

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      Ryan Fuller 3 years ago from Louisiana, USA

      Amen to that and thanks for taking time to read.

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      John Hansen 3 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Good sentiment here, and praise to the "savior you cannot see."

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      Ryan Fuller 4 years ago from Louisiana, USA

      Glad you liked it man. Thanks for stopping by.

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      wow this was amazing

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      Ryan Fuller 4 years ago from Louisiana, USA

      Thank you and you as well lady e. Thank you for the kind words and thoughts.

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      Elena 4 years ago from London, UK

      That was so beautiful and Inspiring to read. It gave me comfort that God watches over me even when I think He has gone on Annual Leave while I'm facing tough times. Also, reflecting on my Christian Life.....because like a thief in the night, He will come back. Thanks & Stay Blessed.

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      Ryan Fuller 4 years ago from Louisiana, USA

      You are very welcome lcbenefield. I am glad you enjoyed it. thanks for giving it a read.

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      lcbenefield 4 years ago from Georgia

      Your lovely poem flowed so beautifully. What a tribute to the Savior. Voted up, awesome and beautiful. Thank you for sharing this.

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      Ryan Fuller 4 years ago from Louisiana, USA

      Thank you all for sharing your thoughts and positive feedback on this poem. It always feels good to write from the heart

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      Enlydia Listener 4 years ago from trailer in the country

      Very nice.

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      Linda Bilyeu 4 years ago from Orlando, FL

      Awesome poem Ryan. From the heart :)

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      Chris Achilleos 4 years ago

      This is a very touching and beautiful hub which I really enjoyed reading. Voted up, useful and shared!

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      Ryan Fuller 4 years ago from Louisiana, USA

      Thanks for the comment sunflower. I will check out that song. Thanks for bringing it to my attention. Have a bless day.

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      sunflowerforests 4 years ago from The light in the forest of doubt.

      This is nice. I love Him too... :)

      Your work brings this song to my mind.

      http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8iSVF2XM7yQ

      Voted up