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My Lil Love Story

Updated on February 2, 2013

Here i give a voice 2 my lil love story...
There was dis petty mistress,
n' der was dis silly me!
My crush went growning deeper,
But nothing cud she evr see!

I knew that a magic existed,
Cud feel it in her,
Mesmerizing eyes..
She neither spoke it,
Nor gave me a hint.
Jus hid it in her,
Hypnotizing smile!

I dared a thousand times,
To show her all dat's hidden within;
Words failed me wen i saw,
Through "those eyes",
But- somewhere down my heart,
Did i always know;
She would someday accept it,
To my sheer surprise!

I have revived all strength-yet again,
To confess every truth, i believe-
You always knew!
I love you & would do forever,
Trust me once & say- you too! :)

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      Jennifer 5 years ago from Lost...In Video Games

      I like this. It reminds me of e.e cummings who wrote in a similar style (lower case letters, etc.). Thumbs up!

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      Your Lover 6 years ago from Your Heart

      thanks.. happy to hear that you like it :)

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      sameerk 6 years ago from India