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Updated on August 15, 2016
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I am a mother, a metal head, a goth girl, and lover of all darkness. I'm also a writer, a cake decorator, and a general weirdo. FUN!

I Love These Two

I wrote this poem 7 years ago. I could write a completely new version of this with the changes that have occurred with my now 12 year old and now 8 year old. One thing hasn't changed, though, they are still my proudest achievement.

One has the most gorgeous blue eyes you've ever seen,

One has the most gorgeous brown eyes you've ever seen.

One is tall and skinny,

One is short and chunky.

They both have long black eyelashes,

They are both so beautiful they look like angels.

One has a great sense of humor,

One can't quite talk yet.

One loves to dance,

One tries really hard to.

They both give the warmest hugs you've ever had,

They are both the loves of my life.

One is five,

One is two.

One is Ashton,

One is Preston.

They are both my pride and joy.

They're both the coolest kids you'll ever meet.

One calls me mommy,

One calls me moh-yee.

One looks like his daddy,

One looks like his mommy.

They're both my life.

They are both my world.

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    Poetry Girl 7 years ago from Arizona

    very, very sweet

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    Mizzery Chick 7 years ago from Outside your window...

    Aww, thanks Kimberly! I'm glad I could make you smile. They make me smile every day. When I have the crappiest days, these two are lifesavers. : )

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    lyricsingray 7 years ago

    Becca I want those boys too.

    Lovely Hub made me smile today, which is so refreshing, this really is inspiring and made me feel good.

    For that I thank you tons!!!!!!!!

    Kimberly

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    Mizzery Chick 7 years ago from Outside your window...

    Thank you so much MOW! I think they're quite gorgeous, too... : )

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    myownworld 7 years ago from uk

    Lovely poem! Your boys are beautiful.... (Reminded me of my own little daughter..) so I can relate.... :)

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    Mizzery Chick 7 years ago from Outside your window...

    Thank you for the comments Moulik. : )

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    Moulik Mistry 7 years ago from Burdwan, West Bengal, India

    Excellent writing, beautifully emotive - very well done...

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    Mizzery Chick 7 years ago from Outside your window...

    Thank you for stopping by, Mike! I just can't wait til they have learned to read so they can read it... lol!

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    Mike Lickteig 7 years ago from Lawrence KS USA

    What a wonderful tribute to your sons, and how lucky they are to have a mother who can so skillfully express her love for her children.

    Thanks for sharing this, it was a delight to read.

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    Mizzery Chick 7 years ago from Outside your window...

    Thanks everyone! I'm quite partial myself! ;) These two are my inspiration, so I know I will be writing many more to come. I'm glad you guys stopped by.

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    Tom Cornett 7 years ago from Ohio

    Wonderful poem by mom. Very cute little guys. I have two grandsons about their age. The little ones are the light of the world. Thanks for sharing. :)

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    K Partin 7 years ago from Garden City, Michigan

    Hi great hub. Good looking boy's you have there. Look forward to reading more. Thanks K.

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    Cagsil 7 years ago from USA or America

    Very nicely written and I'm glad to learn more about you and your family. Thank you again for sharing. The more I know about you, the more I can understand you and be a friend. :)