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My destination finally came near !

Updated on April 17, 2015

I was walking along the road

on a cloudy lonely night

without knowing

which way to go - straight, left or right.


The road was not easy to walk on,

steep, even and then low,

Some turns at interval on either side,

what should I do I didn’t know.


Often I stumbled in darkness

as clouds covered the moon,

I wanted someone to guide me

but who could come there soon?


Someone whispered in my ears

“If you turn left or right,

the road will take you nowhere,

you will go round and round all night”.



All of a sudden there came the wind

it’s velocity was quite strong,

It slowed down my pace for a while

but didn’t stay for too long.



Clouds started to dissipate,

moonlight was over me.

I was not walking alone,

my shadow I could see.


I kept on walking on the main road,

I was tired but didn’t have fear,

The night was over, it was dawn,

my destination came near.


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      debasmita majumder 5 years ago

      woww....its simply awesomeee...khuuub bhalo....:)

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      Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

      @ debasmita majumder - Thank you for stopping by and posting your comment. So nice to know that you have liked the poem.

      God Bless.

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      mikielikie 5 years ago from Texas

      love the picture as much as the poem.

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      Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

      @mikielikie - Thanks a lot for your comment,very nice of you my friend.

      Best Wishes.

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      sexpressions 5 years ago from Wherever my imagination sees fit

      I love the picture, and the story behind it. Walking with no direction is most definitely something everyone will get, whether metaphorically or even literally. Well done.

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      Joyce Haragsim 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

      lovely picture and a great poem all though a tad creepy.

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      Movie Master 5 years ago from United Kingdom

      Wow Kamalesh, this one is quite a different style for you, loved it!

      Voting up, best wishes my friend.

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      Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

      @sexpressions - Thank you so much for reading the poem and commenting. Glad that you have liked the poem and the picture. Much appreciated.

      Best Wishes,

      Kamalesh

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      Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

      @ writer20 - Many thanks for the comment and support. You always have been so nice.

      Trust you are all well.

      Best Wishes,

      Kamalesh

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      Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

      @Movie Master - I am so glad that you have liked the poem.

      Thank you so much for your comment and support.Very kind of you my dear Friend and I appreciate very very much.

      Trust things are all O.K. at your end.

      Best Wishes,

      Kamalesh

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      Silver Poet 5 years ago from the computer of a midwestern American writer

      Unusual. I am pretty picky about poetry, and I liked this one. Voted up.

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      Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

      Silver Poet - I am thankful to you for the wonderful comment which you have made. This means a lot to me.

      Thank you once again for all your kind words.

      Wishing you All the Best.

      Kamalesh

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      Mitali Sen 5 years ago

      It is a very beautiful poem and the picture too. I like the poem especially due to its simplicity, so easy to understand and how nicely the thoughts have been expressed in a very easy going manner. Well done.

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      Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

      Mitali Sen - Many thanks. I am glad that you have liked the poem.

      Best Wishes.

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      Maria Jordan 5 years ago from Jeffersonville PA

      Kamalesh050,

      Thanks for reminding us that we only need faith and inner strength to go along our life's journey.

      Voted UP & ABI-- hope all is well, mar.

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      Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

      Hi Mar, So nice to see you. Thank you so much for the comment, this means a lot to me.

      I am fine, thank you. Trust things are all well with you too.

      Best wishes.

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      Richard Ricky Hale 5 years ago from West Virginia

      Kamalesh, another great piece of writing. Reminds me of the journey of life. We have our ups and we have our downs, but if we keep everything together, it turns out just fine.

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      Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

      thelyricwriter - It's great to have your beautiful comment on this hub too. You are so good and supportive, hearing from you is a great pleasure. Yes my dear friend you are right ,the concept of the poem is the journey of our life.

      Sometimes we feel lost in this world, cannot choose the right path to reach our goal, we get confused, need God's help and guidance, there are obstacles as we go along but if we pick up courage and go ahead with an optimistic mind, with God's grace we begin to see everything clear , overcoming problems becomes easy and we can attain our objectives.

      Thank you once again for your visit and comment.

      Trust you are all well.

      Best Wishes,

      Kamalesh

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      Emma Zimmer 5 years ago from USA

      Love your poems!!

      Could you take a look at my songs?

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      Kamalesh050 5 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

      Emma Zimmer - Thanks a lot for your comment. Much appreciated. Oh yes, surely you will have my comments on your hubs.

      Best Wishes,

      Kaqmalesh

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