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My love Left Open

Updated on September 2, 2010

It Is Time To See What Others MIss

Love is spectacular

The feelings that rise when we least expect it

One day we feel it

We are in love

It is like everything we care for has been illuminated

We know this feeling and can't wait to share it with the world

We may have watched others feel the way we do and never understood

How good we can feel and how love is real

It can be words on paper that try to describe

The feelings we experience at every glipse

It may be something we did that made the one we love smile

A look from our lover who has so much persuasion

To make our thoughts race and our bodies shake

With a feeling of such devotion

We have never felt so good

It doesn't matter what we have accomplished or where we live

A feeling that is so powerful and strong

It makes us long for more

It makes us dream to be happier than we have ever been

I want the undescribable feeling to never end


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      DREAM ON 7 years ago

      Carolina Muscle Let love Rock.Hope all is well.Thanks for dropping in.The MaryMaxine When one love ends you are leaving room for a new love to begin.Love is there for everyone to enjoy 24/7.Thank you so much.Brandonfan it has been so so long.Nice to hear from you again.I know your busy keeping your honey happy.That is what is really matters.Just keep that love flowing.Thanks for sharing.dl53acy Love has such a pleasant ring to it.Thank you for reminding me what love is all about.

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      dl53acy 7 years ago

      Very nice Dream On, it's wonderful to be love and I feel ya! I wrote a few similar pieces about Love. One thing for sure true Love always finds a way into our hearts and can last forever! Thanks for sharing and blessings to you! :)

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      brandonfan 7 years ago from Mid West

      Now you know that I can relate to this one! Being in love CAN last forever also, it just has it's way of manifesting into other emotions. Awesome Dream On.

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      TheMaryMaxine 7 years ago from Ventura, CA

      It can end, it often does. Nice to remember what its like thou

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      carolina muscle 7 years ago from Charlotte, North Carolina

      Oh yeah!!! well done!