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My pick, My love!

Updated on September 11, 2015

Oh, my love!

To hock a tchainik with my bestie

all day of your beauty,

My dear,

my pastime is

I tell you for sure;

Oh dear!

A Hobson’s choice

definitely you aren’t

neither am I

a juggler’s hocus pocus honking hoax;

a hitch here and a hitch there

ought not to hitch

our hobbling hinges;

Listen proper!

My heart’s delight

you are

making commendable waves

in my thoughts

as well as

in my dreams;

my love for you grows more,

if only more could exceed more!

The current in concentric circles

drowns me in

hugging sweetest memories of you,

My love!

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    • sujaya venkatesh profile image
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      sujaya venkatesh 24 months ago

      tnq 74

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      Hari Prasad S 24 months ago from Bangalore

      Very nice.

      in every hub read,

      i could find,

      a new word,

      that had, ceased,

      to exist.

      - hari

    • sujaya venkatesh profile image
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      sujaya venkatesh 24 months ago

      tnq Col

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      Susie Lehto 24 months ago from Minnesota

      That is a lively poem. You have a great knowledge of words.

      Kudos!

    • sujaya venkatesh profile image
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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnq Thumb

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      JR Krishna 2 years ago from India

      Beautiful poem

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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnq Gyp

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Lovely and so romantic.

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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnq Blo

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 2 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Love it! Very cleverly constructed.

    • sujaya venkatesh profile image
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      sujaya venkatesh 2 years ago

      tnq Akrt Swa

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      Akriti Mattu 2 years ago from Shimla, India

      lovely

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      Shaloo Walia 2 years ago

      nice!