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My son Daniel

Updated on October 14, 2013
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Daniel

My son Daniel

Dear son,

You are the love of my life,

and the strength of my every breath,

Even though we did not grow in step,

In my heart, for you,

My love is kept,

With this burning flame,

That one day we'll meet again,

And your hatred for your absent father,

Will no longer be your pain,

But your compassion that i was an absent dad,

And not a father who was there to beat you,

With these hands of anger and a mind so full of rage,

Like my father before me,

Who started this stage,

But son every time I stare at your picture,

It calms my anger and rage,

With the thoughts of breaking the cycle,

Of the monster,

A monster once made (c)

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    • someonewhoknows profile image

      someonewhoknows 7 years ago from south and west of canada,north of ohio

      Depak the philosopher couldn't do a better job.

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      Tom Cornett 7 years ago from Ohio

      Honest and powerful words...thanks.

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      Amy Heaton 7 years ago

      That's beautiful ~

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      seasoning 7 years ago

      lovely words, beautiful child

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      what a lovely little boy, great heartfelt poem.....

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      Deep 7 years ago from In the middle of nowhere and worldwide but still that T.O.kid from da north of America

      Thank you Seasoning for your kind words, and nice to meet you.

      Hello Queen Poetlorraine how are you my dear, sorry I haven't been too active on hubpages latly but you're always in my heart my friend

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      poetlorraine 7 years ago

      thanks a lot, it is a busy world, glad you are o,h. i feel your prescence

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      Jay 6 years ago

      You and I both know your son loves you man.. Hey D I'm realy glad I found this. Keep up the good work bro

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      Joy56 6 years ago

      hi you are so kind with your words to me, did you know i was seasoning as well once upon a time..... Just Joy for now though, though getting bored with that name, how are you, how is your son, and do you see him?

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      Joy56 6 years ago

      hi you are so kind with your words to me, did you know i was seasoning as well once upon a time..... Just Joy for now though, though getting bored with that name, how are you, how is your son, and do you see him?

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      Deep 6 years ago from In the middle of nowhere and worldwide but still that T.O.kid from da north of America

      thank you Joy that because respect is a two way street and when someone show me love, I give them love back,

      and yes I new, by your style of writing that there was three of you out there lol

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      Joy56 6 years ago

      ha ha

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      suziecat7 6 years ago from Asheville, NC

      This is a poem that gets to the heart of things. Very deep and well done. And what a beautiful child. Thanks for sharing.

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      Deep 6 years ago from In the middle of nowhere and worldwide but still that T.O.kid from da north of America

      Thanks suziecat, that beacuse it came deep from the hart

      and his beauty came from his beautiful mother.

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      Beth100 6 years ago from Canada

      Your son is one of the fortunate ones who has a dad who understands the cycle and the importance of breaking the links of the chain. You're amazing and one day when he sees you again, he will know the power that you have.

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      Deep 6 years ago from In the middle of nowhere and worldwide but still that T.O.kid from da north of America

      Beth thank you. Your comment on my son and this hub means

      alot to me

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      Helen Murphy Howell 6 years ago from Fife, Scotland

      Hi, firstly what a beautiful wee boy - he is adorable! Secondly, you have a lot of love in that heart of yours but you also have loads of talent! Keep at it, you're an original.

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      IdeaMorphist 6 years ago from Chicagoland

      This truly touched my heart ?

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      Deep 6 years ago from In the middle of nowhere and worldwide but still that T.O.kid from da north of America

      Seeker7, thank you for you comment

      And for following my hubs..

      And yes he is a beautiful little man

      Got his good looks from his beautiful mother haha

      IdeaMorphist I am glad that my words to me son

      has touched your heart. That mean that the favor

      has been return for the enlightenment

      And joy of the soul you share with us all.. thanks

      Minnetonka twin thanks. I think my style

      Of writing comes from a combo of songwriting for so many years, being a watcher of the world depression stress and life itself. I know it's not for everyone but it is what I do

      So tank you for reading

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      amanda frahill 3 years ago

      Shes a faboulous mother,fab daughter who is alwaz lukin after everyone. She Luks after old age pensioners shes feels so gifted to be able to her job wiv respect an dignity,towads the folk she feels proud to know these 0,a,p, she always commenting on how much knowledge she is proud to have learnt so much more frm folk that have actually experienced it by living it godbless all ov my o.a.p.s fr helping my girl grow amandaxxx

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