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My song(One last chance)

Updated on May 7, 2012

An apology followed by a sweet proposal

A mistake once done can never be undone but you can make people forget the pain by giving them something greater than the pain :)
In India there is a quote ," Rahiman dhaga prem ka mat toro chatkay,tute pe fir na jude jure gaanth pari jaye". Meaning once the bond of love is broken it can never be mend again even if you mend it there will be scar left and it will be weaker than before. What I think is totally opposite to what most of the people think according to me whatever can be broken can be mend doesn't matter what it is you just have to put effort into it.

Here is a poem that shows how a boy who made a mistake wants to apologize and he knows how to mend a broken heart, yeah you know it as well, with lots of love. Read to see what he does and what he says to the girl.

Love is a beautiful thing
I have seen it through my eyes
Love is a wonderful feeling
Until it lies

Its a great sensation
I have felt it through my skin
Its not a thing, you can never
End it in a blink

Its as expensive
As soul to a man
As rich as
A person with huge gold land

You could not just walk away
You have to tear your way
Tear apart my weak heart
The safest place you can ever stay

It is best thing
You can ever get
Yes, I am selfish
Cause I want you to feel that

Like a drug
I want you to be addicted
To me and heart and my will
Yes, its cause I love the way you smell

I always keep saying
Things like that
Cause I am crazy
And I am mad

I don't want to leave you
But you want to move on
I won't let you go
Just let me have one last chance

One last chance is all that I need
I want you to see everything I feel
Just say yes when I am on my knees
Raising my hand and asking you

"Will you marry me?" :)

Thanks for reading, Hope you all liked it :)

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    • endless sea profile imageAUTHOR

      Akhand Pratap SIngh 

      6 years ago from Lucknow(U.P.) India

      It has always been my pleasure. @vechiclereg

    • endless sea profile imageAUTHOR

      Akhand Pratap SIngh 

      6 years ago from Lucknow(U.P.) India

      Thank you very much msrosenson :)

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      msorensson 

      6 years ago

      Wow..so sweet..indeed..be fearless..I hope she accepts your proposal, and I wish you many happy moments together.

    • endless sea profile imageAUTHOR

      Akhand Pratap SIngh 

      6 years ago from Lucknow(U.P.) India

      Thank you vechiclereg, thanks for visit :)

    • endless sea profile imageAUTHOR

      Akhand Pratap SIngh 

      6 years ago from Lucknow(U.P.) India

      Thank you!! :)

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      Angelme566 

      6 years ago

      Wow , this is so beautiful , one last chances..go for it . make it worthy since it's your lats chance , what ever would it yield to , no more regrets because you did your best and take all risk in one last chance..

      This is so moving , i can feel every line of it..

      Voted Up , beautiful . awesome , interesting !

    • endless sea profile imageAUTHOR

      Akhand Pratap SIngh 

      6 years ago from Lucknow(U.P.) India

      people never fall in or out of love.. they just grow strong or weak... and anything that is weak can b made stronger :)

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      shimmering Dawn 

      6 years ago

      Yes, I am with you... it can be mended ...or else there be lives just ended, children on the streets, and hopelessness to live with... Oh darn... it is more like people do not have the will to make the wrong right... they find the easy way out... I believe that once loved its forever... You cannot change much about it... though people do talk about falling OUT of love..

      Have a blessed day!

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      Akhand Pratap SIngh 

      6 years ago from Lucknow(U.P.) India

      Thank you!! I hope to give many more works here!!! Thank you for considering me part of your family I will love to grow up here and gain knowledge and share my works :)

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      Akhand Pratap SIngh 

      6 years ago from Lucknow(U.P.) India

      KDuBarry03 thank you!! with piano and soft strings and woodwinds, u made it sound awesome.. thank you for visit

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      b. Malin 

      6 years ago

      The Bee Gee's had a Song, "How To Mend a Broken Heart"...I'm so Glad you believe it's possible to do so "Endless Sea". You are a True Romantic and it come through clearly in your Song!

      I want to say a "Warm Welcome to Hub Pages"...we are like a Family of Writers here. I now look forward to Following your Hubs!

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      KDuBarry03 

      6 years ago

      I can definitely hear this being sung with a piano background with some soft strings and woodwinds. Excellent job :)

    • endless sea profile imageAUTHOR

      Akhand Pratap SIngh 

      6 years ago from Lucknow(U.P.) India

      Thanks Kebenett1 just a work of my imagination.. Hope to give more beautiful works in future :)

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      Kebennett1 

      6 years ago from San Bernardino County, California

      Voted Up and beautiful! I really like the words, I sang it to myself and it was great (of coarse I had to make up my own rhythm!)

    • endless sea profile imageAUTHOR

      Akhand Pratap SIngh 

      6 years ago from Lucknow(U.P.) India

      Thanks Nirmala very appreciated motivation :)

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      Akhand Pratap SIngh 

      6 years ago from Lucknow(U.P.) India

      Abhilash thanks for the suggestion I will try to keep that in mind next time and if I could I will add some long phases i.e. if they go well with my poem :)

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      Nirmala Ghosal 

      6 years ago

      nice......very thoughtfully made :)

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      abhilash 

      6 years ago

      bro its quite good but in middle of d song if u add some long phase

      sory if i have crossed my line but i like it

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