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My Writing

Updated on November 24, 2016
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My name is Loata Moala I am 28yrs old single mother of 3 boys ages 6, 4 and 1 I have been writing poetry since I was 14 yrs old my passion

My writing

Can you see the pain in her eyes
Can you hear it when she speaks
A soul shattered within
Yet her heart somehow still beats
Can you see the tears
Dried upon her face
Hidden behind her make up
To get through another long day
She hides it to so well
So no one can see
All the broken pieces of what's left
She holds it in so deep
A scarred girl
With A broken past
Longed to be accepted
Tho they judged her every step
With the biggest heart
She had so much love to give
But It was their daily routine
To break her lively spirit within
If it wasn't one thing
It was the other
A constant battle
She had to fight to pull herself together
On the outside
The world seen her laughter n smiles
Blind to see the war within
She been fighting behind close doors
Fighting off the negativity
They constantly put in her
A heart longed to be loved
Though she felt she was never enough
Nights she cried to sleep
Asking god why
What did I do to deserve
So much pain in my life?
She never realized it was within herself
She cared too much how they felt
That's when she opened her eyes
God only puts his strongest soljahs
Thru the biggest trials
To learn to grow
From every obstacle that comes along
That's when she was able to see
The battle she was fighting
Was in the mirror looking Back at me


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      Loata 12 months ago

      Thanks guys appreciate it the feedback. :)

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      Sheez J 12 months ago

      good....nicely expressed.....

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      Patricia Scott 12 months ago from sunny Florida

      Yes...we can be our own worst enemy....well expressed.

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      John Hansen 12 months ago from Queensland Australia

      Very inspirational and well written.