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My Fantasy (poem)

Updated on March 24, 2014

Seasons of dreaming of my fantasy

Yet there was just one who trusted my sight

And there she was waiting waiting for me

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Some soft summer’s mist where it came to be

Touching my heart and this cause to excite

Seasons of dreaming of my fantasy

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Confusion possessing my clarity

Resting at table was comfort from plight

And there she was waiting waiting for me

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Hidden in shadows was forbidden key

Some missing piece which I couldn’t ignite

Seasons of dreaming of my fantasy

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I searched and I struggled through mystery

With but one candle which always shown bright

And there she was waiting waiting for me

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It took me wisdom of quiet to see

What soft summer’s mist some fool turned to night

Seasons of dreaming of my fantasy

And there she was waiting waiting for me

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      Eric Pelka 3 years ago from State College, Pennsylvania

      Very nice flow. Good use of repetition. Not much I can say but brilliant. I suggest adding pictures and other capsules to get it featured.

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      Bill Holland 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Beautifully written, Martin!

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      Nadine May 3 years ago from Cape Town, Western Cape, South Africa

      I get a lovely feeling from your poem. Well done

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      Faith Reaper 2 years ago from southern USA

      Really nice one here! Beautiful. Up and more, tweeting and pinning. God bless

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      Graham Lee 2 years ago from Lancashire. England.

      Hi Martin. Excellent. Yes a fantasy is always a fantasy, painful I know.

      Graham.

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      Victor W. Kwok 2 years ago from Hawaii

      Great poem, Martin! Really brilliant!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. An absolutely wonderful fantasy.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 2 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. An absolutely wonderful fantasy.

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