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My Promise (poem)

Updated on August 26, 2012

My dear my love my world my precious soul

Please take my hand that I may bless your life

And be your shield for any future strife

To be that piece of life that makes you whole

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That every day you walk through will be bliss

And all your needs I’ll meet to see you smile

An at your feet such wonders I’ll compile

Your dream your heaven paradise my this

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But though I dream alas I’m just a man

A man whose dream right now holds only you

Tomorrow’s dream may change oh yes it’s true

But for this dream I’ll do what legends can

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All this I wish plus love that will not die

But I can only promise this I’ll try

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      wetnosedogs 4 years ago from Alabama

      Pretty words and the song is a great touch. Also love that picture.

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Oh, so very beautiful is this poem. I love your poetry. Well done. In His Love, Faith Reaper

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      This was most impressive. Awesome and up.

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      Linda Crist 4 years ago from Central Virginia

      Very tender and moving. Great job!

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      Janhorner 4 years ago

      Simply beautiful. Such endearing words from a true poet.

      Jan

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      Farhat 4 years ago from Delhi

      as honestly you expressed your feelings to your love & so honestly you accepted the truth of man's dreams ..."Tomorrow’s dream may change oh yes it’s true" ........Wonderful saying!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      This was so beautiful and romantic. Love the pic and video.

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      Michele Travis 4 years ago from U.S.A. Ohio

      mhatter,

      gentle and lovely.

      Words with so much meaning.

      Voted up.

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      Thomas Silvia 4 years ago from Massachusetts

      A very awesomely written poem. great video has well !

      Vote up and more !!!

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Beautiful love poetry. I love that picture!!

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      LaThing 4 years ago from From a World Within, USA

      This poem felt soft and tender! Beautiful words with so much truth to it.... Loved it, M!

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      Suzette Walker 4 years ago from Taos, NM

      Beautiful poetry and beautiful images!

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      Ann1Az2 4 years ago from Orange, Texas

      How romantic and I'm relieved to know that you know it's just a dream! lol Seriously, though, the sentiment is very heart-felt.

      Voted up.

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      Janis Leslie Evans 4 years ago from Washington, DC

      Ahh, my heart flutters :-) I had to read it twice. You put me in the mind of William Blake. So lovely. Thank you.

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      Glenis Rix 14 months ago from UK

      Martin, you always find great pics to accompany your poetry.

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