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My Tomorrows (poem)

Updated on July 11, 2012

Could I should I free this feeling inside

And what will we say when it drifts your way

Will you take my heart and cast it away

Or will my tomorrows open up wide


Should I could I trust chance not to stray

And let you decide the fate of my pride

Will you be the cause I shrivel and hide

Or will my tomorrows glow from today


Why is it a smile has done this to me

I who met dangers much stranger than this

I who enjoyed nights that others dream of


Could I should I leave this to destiny

And one little kiss perhaps she’ll dismiss

Or will my tomorrows be filled with love


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      Ann1Az2 5 years ago from Orange, Texas

      M, beautiful poem and a great singer - an unbeatable combination! Voted up.

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      Joshua Zerbini 5 years ago from Pennsylvania


      Beautiful, powerful, and excellent poem. I have to echo Ann's comment. I love the combination of movie and poetry! Again, incredible job, keep it up!

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      Janhorner 5 years ago

      Really like this; wondering what tomorrow will bring.

      Lovely, enjoyed reading.


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      AliceFSpencer 5 years ago from Texas

      My tomorrow turned into 10 yrs of love this makes me smile great poem!

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      myownlife 5 years ago from london

      Awesome poem.

      Tomorrow will bring every success.

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      Tracia Bussey 5 years ago from Southern USA

      Lovely poem Mhatter!! Some risks are worth taking!

      God bless!

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      dinkan53 5 years ago from India

      Great writings, many useful things can be done in a day if you don't always make that day tomorrow. Rated as awesome.

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      Pamela-anne 5 years ago from Kitchener, Ontario

      Wonderful poem well written but I believe the saying " it is better to have loved and lost than to never have loved before" thanks for sharing keep them coming! take care pam.

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      Jools99 5 years ago from North-East UK

      Mhatter, I liked this very much - the video really complement the poetry and I like the apprehensive start to every stanza - 'could I, should I....', it showed a kind of youthful vulnerability. Really enjoyed it.

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      Deb Hirt 5 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Truly wonderful, as per usual. You are a great poet.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      So beautiful. I'm listening to Frank as i write. He was my sisters love, I am just now finding what a great singer he was. Should I could I , is a wonderful expression we all ask.. thank you..

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      IntegrityYes 5 years ago

      You did well with that poem.

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      Deborah 5 years ago from Las Vegas

      Frankie's singing, and I'm writing, and reading. Great hub, my new chill out page. Thanks Mhatter, you nailed it again!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      So lovely and Frank Sinatra makes it just perfect.

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