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My Whispers (poem)

Updated on January 11, 2014

Return my whispers back to me

Those silver stones of destiny

Which others blessed my eyes to see

That from restraints I would be free


Each dream at night an open door

Each lingered light which yearned for more

Was I the sight they waited for

Or just a might whose hopes restore


The stars in heaven danced for me

Hearts set adrift I offered more

We delved into worth wishing for

That for a time lost youths breathed free


As shallow winds rushed by our door

We dreams explored our destiny

A brand new flare our world to see

As fantasy some truth restore


From other’s hopes I soon was free

But our new dawn I couldn’t see

For it was past my destiny

Return my whispers back to me

Music only


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      Dianna Mendez 3 years ago

      This was a nice break from my day. Love the poetry and dream of hope.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. Lovely whispers indeed.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      A lovely, nostalgic poem, Martin.

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      Victor W. Kwok 4 years ago from Hawaii

      I love the flow of the poem. It's so full of love and life.

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      Karen Silverman 4 years ago

      i notice that you have a deep and abiding love for the world! The heavens, the changing seasons, the stars, weather - you weave them throughout your poetic stories consistently and beautifully!

      Regrets suck, eh M?


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      kidscrafts 4 years ago from Ottawa, Canada

      Very beautiful but sad poem! Beautiful picture at the top. I like the music too!

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      Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Good morning Martin! Thank you for starting my day off with a touch of beauty.

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      DJ Anderson 4 years ago

      You write with the feel of silk to flesh. Your words dance around

      yet, bring such sadness to the heart. Such contradiction to, what is

      and what could have been.

      Incredibly beautiful, yet inconsolably sad.