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No Where To Hide

Updated on September 20, 2010


No Where To Hide


Not a rock to hide under~

No sand to hide in~

They attack with snickers~

They assail with incorrect strong opinions.


No covers are big enough~

No immediate answers to prayers~

The controlling people seem to be~ Everywhere!


Their gnarls are like spikes that pierce the hide~

No ride seems long enough~

No music sweet nor ample~

To break their self centered mean molds and minds.


No passage available to escape their grasp~

Not a nook to hide in~

Nor a door to slam!


They control with fury~

With rapid firing words~

They lack sensitivity~

Sentimental thoughts are~

Void in them the curds!


Cruel un-tethered their claws are always reeling~

They spin like wheels downward with un- chartered reflection seething!


There is no where to hide~

No walk sufficient ~

No meditating strong enough~

When their presence rapes and pillages it is most devastating and ruff!


I repeat~

“Those that are last shall be first”~

“While those that are first beware their day will come when they are last!


There is no where to hide~

There is no break away~

The assaulters are many~

As the meek are quite fighting to be heard all the days.


Yet there are those whom are also sweet and safe~

That do give solace when there is no escape~

Those that whisper encouragement softly~

Those pure spirits whom build you up unselfishly.

For those precious souls we are grateful~

For those are whom we should gravitate to when ever doubtful.


When there is no where to hide~

God sends His love through treasured supple spoken beings~

When there are no rocks to take cover behind~

The Holy-est of Spirits comes out in certain humankind~

Allowing the care giver types~

To go on living astride…


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      Lisa J Warner AKA Lisa Luv 4 years ago from Conneticut, USA

      aviannovice Thank you.... yeah at the time I wrote this ---I certainly was feeling it... :) May you have an awesome day!

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      We all need to believe in someone and something. Supportive people will always be important, but as you state, those that wish to control and not my cup of tea, either. A great statement.

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      Lisa J Warner AKA Lisa Luv 4 years ago from Conneticut, USA

      Eiddwen Thank You! Enjoy your day also!

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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Brilliant Lisa and has to be one of your best. I truly loved it and vote up.

      Enjoy your day .


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      Lisa J Warner AKA Lisa Luv 7 years ago from Conneticut, USA

      Saddlerider1 again your wisdom is right on the mark..As well friends like you and your encouraging comforting words (like the ending of this writing)are a big blessing and makes the situation feel so much better.

      Thank You for your reading and words of healing.

      Also your comment reminded me of a bible passage (Philipians 3) "Bretheren, Icount not myself to have apprehended: but this one thing I do, forgetting those things which are behind, and reaching forth unto those things which are before, I press toward the mark for the prize of the high calling of God in Christ Jesus."

      May God Bless you and every soul that reads this..

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      saddlerider1 7 years ago

      I am sorry to hear your frustration and pain between each verse. The world is full of attackers with condescending words and deeds. Remember to keep walking forward with your head up high toward the light and press forward as this to in time shall pass. Peace my friend.