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Updated on November 20, 2010


Numb is what I need to feel,
Would be easier to take a pill,
But still the hurt remains,
Deep within my veins....

The pain of loving you,
Unbearable and yet so easy to do,
All that I thought I knew,
Now gone because of you...

Met you one day,
Fell hard the next,
Our relationship,
Was quite complexed.

You became my bestfriend,
My lover,
My world,
The one that stole the heart,
Out of this country girl...

You broke my walls,
You broke my barriers,
The only thing protecting me,
From getting hurt.

Numb is what I want to be,
Please father set me free,
Save me from this misery...
Why can't he just let me be.

I never loved a man,
The way I did him,
I know that day,
Will never come again...

Numb me please...
From head-to-toe,
So it wouldn't be this hard,
To let him go.


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      ROMANCER OF LIFE 7 years ago from Honolulu, Hawaii

      @ Willbfree1,

      Nicely said... that is true. Writing about your own pain, and struggles; is a way to let other's know that they are not alone. Life is a journey we have to forsee, we need to complete that journey to be able to tell our stories. Life is a blessing, regardless of our pain. We are emotional beings, and to be in touch with all parts of our emotions, rather good or bad is a great experience. Thank you for visiting and leaving your feedback, I always appreciate that =-)Your truelove will never die in your heart, and that person will always live on in your memory. Happy Holidays!


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      Will Robinson 7 years ago from North Carolina

      Wow! This is really a good. I love it when people express the way that they feel. It really good to get it out because others can relate and realize that they are not the only one that are hurting in the world. They will also realize that the person that is expressing their feeling is surviving. Although, they're in pain they are saying I will live on regardless of the pain. They are also saying I'll live to see another day. Hopefully another day and a chance to find that one true love.. Thanks for the hope.

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      ROMANCER OF LIFE 7 years ago from Honolulu, Hawaii

      @ Pachuca213,

      Thank you so much for reading and stopping in. I can't wait to visit your hub, I'm going to be stopping in. Love when good is good, love gone bad hurts like "heck" but... it's a temporary feeling that will be overcome. Hope you have a great weekend!


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      Pachuca213 7 years ago

      I can relate to this one. I have probably 20 hubs or more (poetry) about the very same subject of feeling the pain after losing love. Very beautiful!!!