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Natures Fall

Updated on September 26, 2013

Natures colors ...steal my mind
beautiful things... are what I find
blends of colors filled with reams
only in forgotten dreams

Envelop me as freedom reigns
taking my soul.... to higher planes
when Fall springs forth as
seasons pass,
Mother Nature displays
her brilliant class

Orange hues with yellow tones
sprayed across... as colored roams
reflected deep ...in tree lined lake
keeping me silent .. to partake

Michael Montoya ..2013

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      Richard Mawby 3 years ago from United Kingdom

      Beautiful poem. As I read the poem after glancing at the photograph first, the image portrayed in my mind as I read the words came to life. Voted up =]

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      Bill Holland 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

      The colors are just starting to change here....love the sharp feeling to the air....and you captured it all perfectly, Michael. Well done.

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      Eric Dierker 3 years ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      A poem truly worth one thousand photos. What serenity and beauty this poem brings into our life. I am a richer man now than before you shared this creation personally with me.

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      ocfireflies 3 years ago from North Carolina

      Michael,

      One of your finest!

      Kim

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you .. Richard .. very much appreciated..!

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you ..Bill !

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thanks Eric.. I try to put the reader into what I write .. glad I could take you there with me..

      michael

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Kim.. I see from your comment ..you love the colors of fall too. here in Colorado it is beautiful in the mountains .. the Aspens are turning and they are gorgeous..!

      thank you Kim..!

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      ocfireflies 3 years ago from North Carolina

      Michael,

      I would love to see your mountains some day. In my mountains in NW North Carolina, there are only hints of the colors starting to show.

      Kim

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 3 years ago from Reno NV

      To stand at the spot where this photograph was taken and read beautiful poetry that transcends. Thank you. Jamie

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      Tijani Achamlal 3 years ago from Morocco

      I love this poem.. its flows really nicely and its written so well.. It paints a beautiful picture!!

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      wetnosedogs 3 years ago from Alabama

      Spectacular, Michael.

      Autumn colors on the trees are not so brilliant in Alabama.

      It's about the only thing I miss being from Wisconsin.

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Jamie.. for your support.!

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you for the comment ..James..`

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      WND.. thank you for visit and the nice comment.!

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      Jackie Lynnley 3 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Another masterpiece. Perfectly done. The picture takes our breath away and your words pull us in. An awesome emotion.

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Jackie ... you are always welcome to my poems .. for your comments are always so supportive .. thank you Ma'mm..

      the South has the finest beauties .. from peaches to flower tree's ..the lord bestowed his glory upon the land.!

      glad you like my work ..

      love ya..

      Michael

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Wetnose stole my word ... well, I will say ... spectacular too! I believe this may be your most beautiful one to date. Yes, here the leaves take a good while to turn. I remember my son as a small boy just loved the ground when all the multi-colored leaves covered the ground in such a colorful wonderment, and he was so upset when we raked them up. lol

      Phenomenal image! Looks like just a little piece of heaven.

      Up and move and sharing

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Faith ..I see you on Google .. if you need help just ask me ..my faithful one..! I will gladly tell you how to navigate within .. hope all is well.. I love the fall colors ..!

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Lovely poem - and I just about needed my glasses for that beautiful photo at the beginning, it was so bright and colourful.

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      Rosemary Sadler 3 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      You captured the colours of fall beautifully

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Ha... thank you Blossom.. it is beautiful ..

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you for the visit ..Rosemay

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. Poetically, creatively and picturesquely wonderful. Passing this on.

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      cleaner3 3 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      thank you Gypsy.. your comment is appreciated..

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      Eiddwen 3 years ago from Wales

      Wonderful Jamie.

      Eddy.

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