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Never I took you forgranted!!!! :(

Updated on November 27, 2011

Never take me for granted

Till today those haunting words

Play loud close to my ears


Never take me for granted

Instantly I shut my ears

At once I close my eyes

Never take me for granted

I’m reminded of your wet eyes

Happily that swallowed all pains


Never take me for granted

Moving each step u cautioned me

Sloppily I winked at those

Never take me for granted

It was all your love

That was all my strength



Never take me for granted

Ask my defunct heart

Never were you some one else

Never took I, you for granted

Just a mirror fixed in-between

Alter I was you & Alter you were I


Never took I, you for granted

One soul two bodies

We lived our lives like


Never took I, you for granted

Lone tuff to keep mirror intact

Finding hard to remain alive


Never took I, you for granted

Wish you hold me for one last time

If beats of heart are still the One....Sweetheart!!!

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    • Ruchi Urvashi profile image

      Ruchi Urvashi 5 years ago from Singapore

      Funny and enjoyable. Keep on writing.Good work.

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      Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

      I enjoyed reading your poem. I enjoyed the video.

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      Prashant 5 years ago from Mumbai, India

      Thanks Ruchi and Vinaya for such sweet comments :)

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      Rosemary Sadler 5 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      Nice poem and I enjoyed the video

    • mljdgulley354 profile image

      mljdgulley354 5 years ago

      I enjoyed your poem. It is not good to take our loved ones for granted.

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      Prashant 5 years ago from Mumbai, India

      @ rosemay - thanks rose

      @mljdgulley - I agree to some extent, but feel love is unconditional and may be theoretically we disagree but practically, we tend to take them for granted - may it be your parents or spouse / gf / bf - out of, but of course, love only!!

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 5 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Loved your poetry and the message, ' Don't take the one you love for granted '

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      Prashant 5 years ago from Mumbai, India

      Thanks 'always exploring' :)

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      Theresa Ast 5 years ago from Atlanta, Georgia

      Interesting and good poem. I like it a lot. Voted up and interesting.

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      Prashant 5 years ago from Mumbai, India

      thank you for your like phdast7. smile!

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      shanaya 5 years ago from Living in my Own Dreams:)

      Hello Prashant! Perfectly chosen words and images as well. I Enjoyed and Loved reading it. You have the power of writing in YOU. Thanks for sharing with us.:)

      voted up, awesome, interesting.

      with lots of Respect

      from SHANAYA:)

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      Prashant 5 years ago from Mumbai, India

      Thanks shanaya for as pretty a comment as you. Reading you guys inspire me somewhat to put across my thoughts. Thanks again

      prashant :)

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