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Night Dies with a Drop of Dew
I feel homesick,
Lying here
In my dark and humid home.
Light and hope are flickering
In and out of shadows –
Of shadows in the corners.
Unfamiliar, I
Am among familiar,
Square angles.
Try to think with angles,
Try to imitate
Acres of sugarcane.
Home isn’t a house anymore
Or a town
Or hard-pressed cider.
Home is where you are
And I am not
There sometimes.
Here's a link to my other poems:
- Poetry by Rose West
The reason I've put this collection together is partly because of myself. I thought it would make things easy if I had all my poetry cataloged in one place. If I get organized, maybe none of my poems will get...
Comments
A well-known person once said, "I... can't... imagine! What life would be like without you."
Thanks for poetry that speaks deeply and with colorful, thought-provoking pictures.
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Thank you for your encouragement! Poetry is such a personal thing, and I always wonder if the poetry I write makes sense to other people.
Liking this one, honest. Could speak for anyone. Well done.
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Thanks, Enigmatic Me! I'm glad you like it!
beautiful - you give me chills at the surprising delight i feel.
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Thank you for reading, eternal cascade! Your support is much appreciated!
Well done...apeaks into the hearts of many who have the same thoughts but are just unable to put it together as well as you have ...
Blessings
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Thank you for your kind comment, Quill! I'm so happy this poem spoke to you!
a beautiful piece.
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Thanks for stopping by, Rayalternately! It means a lot :)
I know these feelings, Rose. I think we all do. Thanks for this thought-filled poem........
I relate to this. Thank you for sharing these kinds of feelings which many of us former mainlanders feel or have felt at sometime or another -- at least the first few years. Now it's sort of in reverse for me. I'm thinking of leaving and I know if I do, I will miss Hawaii in my soul forever. (I've left twice before, so I know....the colors and culture are unforgettable.)
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ExoticHippieQueen, I'm glad you can relate :) You're very welcome!
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Pamela, change and moving around can be difficult, especially at first. But sometimes it is good too. It is hard deciding whether or not to move... I hope it goes well for you!
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