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Nighttime (Haiku)

Updated on July 9, 2012
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Black permeates sky

Stars elegantly shining

Moon glowing bright

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      speaks of the beauty of the nighttime J.

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      Joshua Zerbini 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

      M,

      Thanks for visiting like usual! :)

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      IAmForbidden 4 years ago from Neverland - where children never grow up.

      always welcome J :)

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      Janine Huldie 4 years ago from New York, New York

      Beautiful visual of the nighttime sky. My 3 year old has just recently learned that the moon means that it is nighttime and the sun is daytime. She wakes me most morning now by telling me that the moon is no longer out and that means wake up time. So have to be honest that is so what I was thinking when I read your beautiful haiku. I am of course sharing and voting up too!!

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      Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Simple and yet so descriptive. Well done nephew!

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      Joshua Zerbini 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Janine,

      HAHA, thanks for sharing that little story, I love it! Poetry lets our mind wander off doesn't it? :) Thanks for reading and thanks for your continued support!

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      Joshua Zerbini 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Uncle Bill,

      Thanks I really appreciate it!

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      Civil War Bob 4 years ago from Glenside, Pennsylvania

      Good job, Josh...up and interesting.

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      Joshua Zerbini 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Bob,

      Thanks, I always appreciate your support! :)

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      Civil War Bob 4 years ago from Glenside, Pennsylvania

      Now to complete...

      Black permeates sky

      Stars elegantly shining

      Moon glowing bright

      WHY'S MY DOG WHINING??!! ;)

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      Joshua Zerbini 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Bob,

      Haha Rofl. Thanks bud! :)

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      Joyce Haragsim 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Wonderful poem this morning whoops, it's already afternoon.

      Voted up and beautiful, Joyce.

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      Joshua Zerbini 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Joyce,

      Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.

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      A.E. Williams 4 years ago from Hampton, GA

      Thanks for that, buddy. Enjoyed it.

      -Aubrey

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      Joshua Zerbini 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Aubrey,

      You are certainly welcome!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Real nice. Love that pic. Voted up. There is definitely something magical in the moonlight.

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      Joshua Zerbini 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Gypsy,

      Thanks, appreciate it! :)

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      Rajan Singh Jolly 4 years ago from From Mumbai, presently in Jalandhar,INDIA.

      Darkness with a silver lining ! The haiku is so beautiful.

      Up and beautiful. The moon in all its glory against the darkness. It's a fab picture.

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      KatrineDM 4 years ago

      Josh, that sums up the magic of the night.

      As you may know I have written poetry before, although I have never tried Haiku, so will be keeping an eye on your poems.

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      Joshua Zerbini 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Katrine,

      Yes, I am aware that you have written poetry. Now, you are making me nervous, hehe :)

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      Suzette Walker 4 years ago from Taos, NM

      I think you are doing very well writing haikus, josh. This is beautiful. I love simple and beautiful and that is what haikus are all about. Again, great photo!

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      Joshua Zerbini 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Suzette,

      Thanks that is very encouraging! Yes they are simple and beautiful! Thanks I love this photo!

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      lovedoctor926 4 years ago

      A well-composed and visually captivating poem.

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      lovedoctor926 4 years ago

      haiku oops

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      Joshua Zerbini 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Marlene,

      Thanks! Appreciate it!

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      Joshua Zerbini 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Marlene,

      ROFL No worries!

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      Ruchira 4 years ago from United States

      what better way to describe night-time :) cheers!

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      Joshua Zerbini 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Ruchira,

      Thanks glad you enjoyed it!

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      lovedoctor926 4 years ago

      Really? On this one? ROFL.

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      Joshua Zerbini 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Marlene,

      Really what??

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      lovedoctor926 4 years ago

      The Rolling with laughter reply.

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      Joshua Zerbini 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Marlene,

      Oh because you came back to correct your self, I thought it was funny! So I laughed, hehe :)

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      lovedoctor926 4 years ago

      oh yeah true, I forgot.. It was a haiku and I wrote poem. sorry. I'm working on a hub right now. It's a creative one.

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      Joshua Zerbini 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

      Marlene,

      No problem! :) Like a creative writing?

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Really wonderful this haiku is, Josh.

      Voted up and shared....:-)

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      Joshua Zerbini 4 years ago from Pennsylvania

      dgh,

      Thanks, much appreciated. Thanks for your continual support.

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