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Is It ...Not The End

Updated on May 21, 2012

Yes, I read....

your e-mail today

It said, I won't be home...

I'm going away.

Please, don't look for me,

because this is how

It must be for us..

right now

Is It... Not the End ?

Our love has gotten...hard I feel

Remember.. how it used to be

so soft and so real.

Just so you know

I will always send

my love for you..

so I guess...Is It.. Not the End

For now.. just take

my words and wait

it 's really best...

we don't communicate.

I saw you both.. standing in the rain

and from then on I knew

that we would ...

never be the same.

The rain fell softly

as her lips... you kissed

your lips were once mine

and will be always missed

My tears were hidden

by the rain.....

but the rain.. on my face

could not hide.. my pain

Yes.. I did

I followed you today

although, right now

I know.. what I have to say

Now I'm sure you know

this means goodbye...

Please don't talk

you will just make me cry.

Is It... Not The End?


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      KatrineDalMonte 5 years ago

      Michael, you have written this from a woman'n perspective. It's a very good poem, very deep and heartfelt. It must be so painful when love is no longer reciprocated and watch how the one we once loved has found someone new.

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      Angelme566 5 years ago

      Michael this is such a poignant never easy to say goodbye , it's the word which everyone could hardly utter. Sometimes really no choice but have to , it's like a compulsion.

      This is a moving poem , Voted Up ! Cheers !

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      Girish puri 5 years ago from NCR , INDIA

      Every break invite more happiness, maturity and improvement in relations, very well expressed poem, keep writing

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      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Michael, what a heartbreaking startling revelation, deeply expressed, and touching to the core...

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ Katrine, thank you for comments

      @ angel , thanks angel, glad i have touched you

      @ girish, yes, heartbreak is something i know well. from both sides

      @max, my little kooky bird. thank you max.

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      Ann-Christin 5 years ago from UK

      A very touching and sad poem.

      Voted up

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      Linda Rogers 5 years ago from Minnesota

      Michael-This is so raw and painful and real. Your poetry is brilliant my friend.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ christin, thanks for the comments and your support of my writings.

      one of the twins,well my long lost friend where have you been have not seen your name on my hubs for a while. I hope all is well with you my love. glad you have visited my work. thank you. be safe

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      Linda Rogers 5 years ago from Minnesota

      I was in New York City Michael. Go check out my latest hub on sis and I winning a radio contest. I still can't believe it. Hope all is well with you my friend. Keep the poetry coming.

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      Vincent Moore 5 years ago

      Deep Love hurts and I felt the pain in this beautiful scribe Mike. To witness the breakup and another sharing what only the two of you did is a sinking feeling indeed. I hope you worked it out and you are moving forward my friend. Peace and blessings to you.

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      Annie Fenn 5 years ago from Australia

      I can feel the deep pain and sadness in these words by one torn - and the question/statement "Is it....not the end" speaks of the uncertainty and confusion felt. I have read many of your beautiful and romantic poems, Cleaner and this is one of your best. I love the emotion expressed, maybe because I relate to this as a female. Just beautifully sad. My votes and best wishes to you Michael, from Annie.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      @ vincent, thank you my friend for your comments. they are always appreciated.

      @ Annie, thank you! i tried to write from a woman's perspective since i always write from a man's perspective. Glad a woman could understand this, thank you Annie.

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 5 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Your words convey the sadness so well. Your poem is really beautiful.

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      cleaner3 5 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Blossom, thank you for your kind words about my poem. so happy you like it:)

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      raciniwa 4 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      so sweet yet so sad, how come you have the power to combine those two emotions...great job Michael...

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      cleaner3 4 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Raci, you are catching up my sweet, raci. thank you for the kind words.

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