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Notice Me

Updated on October 14, 2011


The magic moment I remember

Was when I raise my eyes

I see you stood beside

On church day that night


We start our prayer and sang our song

To mighty Lord that night…

And soon I turn to glance at you

And caught your beautiful smile


My heart skips a beat

For reason I do not know

But when church day ends

My heart missed you all of a sudden


My feet start moving slow

So you can catch up to me

Want to walked by you

Want you to be near


You said to me excuse me

That you need to get through

My heart start hopping along

Right behind you


Each day I wish it Sunday

Because that’s church day we meet

I wish that you notice me

That love is right here


Each Sunday I pray

Not for me but for you

And hope that you notice me

Soon…

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      Sunnie Day 5 years ago

      Dear Chanroth...This was so sweet..and what a wonderful place to meet..not only the possibility of sharing hearts one day but sharing prayers..how wonderful to see a couple who holds hands and prays together...intimacy at its best..

      Love,

      Sunnie

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      Manoj Kumar Srivastava 5 years ago from India

      chanroth,

      Greetings from MAKUSR. Such a sweet poem. The sentiments that flow here are truly heart warming. Very good!

      Lots of Love,

      MAKUSR

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      BukowskiBabe 5 years ago from Somewhere in the middle of it all.

      I always thought that the cult was associated with Kali

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      chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA

      Hi Sunnie, its nice to see you again, I haven't heard from you quite long time. :) Many hugs from afar ^_^. @makusr and bukowski, thanks! :)

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      nisa 5 years ago

      I love your poem! How is SF?

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      chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA

      hey nisa, SF...is fine...just a little tired and my fiance is sick...he's a big baby. lol...

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      soufien 5 years ago

      hey chanroth its really wonderful keep going

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      chanroth 5 years ago from California, USA

      Hi soufien, thanks! :)

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